List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit repetitive and lacks clear structure. Try to start with a direct response, then add specific reasons using linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural. Avoid repeating words and keep your sentences concise.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me save time and stay organized. For example, by checking the list, I can easily find the products I need at the supermarket without forgetting anything.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Make sure to answer the question directly and complete your thoughts. Use linking words to explain how making lists helps you at work, and avoid unfinished sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I always make lists for my work because they help me keep track of my tasks. This way, I can complete important jobs on time and avoid forgetting anything, especially before events.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some grammar and vocabulary errors and is somewhat confusing. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use appropriate vocabulary. Also, avoid repeating words and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they trust their memory and feel confident they won't forget anything. Unlike me, they may have clearer minds and prefer to rely on their own recall.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Avoid mistakes like 'nuts' instead of 'notes'. Provide a clear preference and reasons, using linking words to connect your ideas. Keep your sentences complete and concise.

Ejemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me. In contrast, I often forget paper lists at my workplace, so using my phone is quicker and more convenient.

× because it's not only for making time shorter, but also it I can track everything, looking at, looking at the list, what I have in my hand.

✓ because it's not only for shortening time, but also I can track everything by looking at the list of what I have in my hand.

The phrase 'for making time shorter' is awkward; 'for shortening time' is more natural. Also, 'looking at, looking at the list' is repetitive and should be simplified to 'by looking at the list'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× And it's also so easier to find the correct, correct products for me while doing shopping at the store or at the supermarket.

✓ And it's also much easier to find the correct products for me while shopping at the store or supermarket.

The phrase 'so easier' is incorrect; 'much easier' is the correct comparative adverb usage. Also, 'correct, correct' is repetitive and should be reduced to one 'correct'. 'Doing shopping' is unnatural; 'shopping' alone suffices.

× I always create a list even for my work while I am working because it helps me, helps me to track what I have and I always do whatever I have on hand before.

✓ I always create a list even for my work while I am working because it helps me track what I have, and I always do whatever I have on hand first.

The sentence has redundancy with 'helps me, helps me' and awkward phrasing 'do whatever I have on hand before'. Removing repetition and clarifying 'before' to 'first' improves sentence structure and meaning.

× When it comes to time like the day, like a kind of event an I, I always be sure that I am.

✓ When it comes to important days or events, I always make sure that I am prepared.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Rewriting it to a complete sentence with clear meaning improves comprehension and grammatical correctness.

× I think some people of course don't like making less because they are they are proud of their memories.

✓ I think some people, of course, don't like making lists because they are proud of their memories.

The word 'less' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'lists'. Also, adding commas improves readability.

× They don't have fish memory like me.

✓ They don't have a poor memory like me.

The phrase 'fish memory' is a mistranslation or incorrect idiom. The correct expression is 'poor memory' to convey forgetfulness.

× They're maybe minds are clear not like me 'cause sometimes I have brain fog and they are just trust, trusting themselves, not forgetting about anything or their their catching their eyes.

✓ Maybe their minds are clear, unlike mine, because sometimes I have brain fog. They just trust themselves, not forgetting anything or missing things.

The original sentence has pronoun errors ('They're maybe minds'), repetition ('their their'), and awkward phrasing. Correcting pronouns and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammar.

× I usually use my nuts actually on my phone because whenever I start listing on the paper I forgot.

✓ I usually use my notes on my phone because whenever I start listing on paper, I forget.

The word 'nuts' is incorrect; it should be 'notes'. Also, 'forgot' should be 'forget' to match the present tense context.

× I forget all the time the paper on my work place on the table actually.

✓ I forget the paper on my workplace table all the time.

The sentence is awkwardly structured. Rearranging the sentence improves clarity. 'Work place' should be 'workplace' as one word.

× But I am always using my phone in my hand that helps me a lot and which is also make it quicker and faster for me to.

✓ But I always use my phone in my hand, which helps me a lot and also makes things quicker and faster for me.

The original sentence is incomplete and has incorrect verb forms ('which is also make'). Correcting verb agreement and completing the sentence improves grammar and clarity.