List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use complete sentences and avoid repetition. For example, instead of 'when I wanna, when I want, when I want to do shopping and making a list,' say 'whenever I go shopping, I make a list.' Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly, such as 'because' or 'so that.'

Ejemplo: Yes, whenever I go shopping, I make a list because it helps me stay within my budget and shop more quickly and efficiently, so I avoid buying unnecessary items.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good content but some grammar mistakes and unclear phrasing reduce clarity. Use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structure. For example, say 'When I organize my week with a list, I understand what work I need to do, including exams, which makes me more productive and less stressed.' Also, use linking words like 'which' to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: As a teacher, I make a list to organize my week. When I do this, I clearly understand the tasks I need to complete, including preparing exams, which makes me more productive and less stressed.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammar errors and unclear expressions. Use present tense consistently and clarify your points. For example, say 'Maybe they want to be more spontaneous, like artists or painters. They don't want to be restricted by a list because it might limit their creativity.'

Ejemplo: Maybe some people prefer to be spontaneous, like artists or painters. They don't like making lists because they feel it restricts their creativity and freedom to work naturally.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using smoother linking words and correcting minor grammar mistakes. For example, say 'It depends on the occasion. As a teacher, I prefer to make my lists on my computer or phone because it's faster, more organized, and I can share them with my students.'

Ejemplo: It depends on the occasion. As a teacher, I prefer to make my lists on my computer or phone because it's faster, more organized, and I can easily share them with my students.

× Yes, I always make a shopping list when I wanna, when I want, when I want to do shopping and making a list.

✓ Yes, I always make a shopping list when I want to go shopping and make a list.

The phrase 'making a list' is incorrectly used after 'when I want to do shopping'. The verb after 'want to' should be in base form, so 'make' is correct instead of 'making'. Also, 'do shopping' is better expressed as 'go shopping'.

× Helps main to maintain in my budget and I do shopping faster and more organized.

✓ It helps me to maintain my budget and I shop faster and more organized.

The pronoun 'main' is incorrect; it should be 'me'. Also, 'maintain in my budget' is incorrect; the preposition 'in' is unnecessary here. 'Do shopping' is better as 'shop'.

× So as not to buy unnecessarily items.

✓ So as not to buy unnecessary items.

The adverb 'unnecessarily' is incorrectly used to modify the noun 'items'. The correct adjective form 'unnecessary' should be used instead.

× As a teacher, I have to do a list of my work.

✓ As a teacher, I have to make a list of my work.

The verb 'do' is incorrectly used with 'a list'. The correct collocation is 'make a list'. Also, 'do a list' is not idiomatic English.

× When I do a organized my week, I can understand what work I have to do the exams and that makes me more productive and less stressful.

✓ When I organize my week, I can understand what work I have to do for the exams and that makes me more productive and less stressed.

The phrase 'do a organized' is incorrect; the verb should be 'organize' without 'do'. Also, 'do the exams' should be 'do for the exams' to indicate purpose. 'Less stressful' should be 'less stressed' to describe the speaker's feeling.

× Maybe because they wanted to be more spontaneous like artists, painters.

✓ Maybe because they want to be more spontaneous like artists, painters.

The sentence is about a general reason, so present tense 'want' is appropriate instead of past tense 'wanted'.

× They don't want to be stuck in a list that will flow their work instead of listing things what to do and what not to do.

✓ They don't want to be stuck with a list that will slow their work instead of listing things to do and what not to do.

The phrase 'flow their work' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'slow their work'. Also, 'stuck in a list' should be 'stuck with a list'. The phrase 'listing things what to do' is incorrect; it should be 'listing things to do'.

× It depends on the occasion.

✓ It depends on the occasion.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× Being a teacher again, I prefer to do my list on computer or my phone.

✓ Being a teacher again, I prefer to make my list on the computer or my phone.

The verb 'do my list' is incorrect; the correct collocation is 'make my list'. Also, 'on computer' should be 'on the computer'.

× It's faster and more organized and it could reach to my students too.

✓ It's faster and more organized and it can reach my students too.

The verb 'reach' does not require the preposition 'to' after it. Also, 'could' is less certain than 'can' in this context.

× So yes, I prefer to do the list on my iPhone.

✓ So yes, I prefer to make the list on my iPhone.

Again, 'do the list' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make the list'.