List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons. Use simple and correct sentences to express your ideas naturally.

Ejemplo: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need at the moment.

Sugerencia: Your answer is fragmented and lacks coherence. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, clarify how making a list helps you.

Ejemplo: Yes, I make a list of my tasks because I am learning English before going abroad for my studies. It helps me stay organized and manage my time better.

Sugerencia: Your answer is vague and grammatically incorrect. Provide a clear reason and explain it with supporting details. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to remember things in their mind, which they find more convenient and flexible.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and contains errors. Choose one preference and explain why, using clear sentences and linking words to connect your ideas.

Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists both on paper and on my phone because if I lose the paper list, I can still check the list on my phone.

× No, I'm not.

✓ No, I don't.

The sentence 'No, I'm not' is incorrect because the question asks about a habitual action (making a list when shopping), which requires the present simple tense. 'I'm not' is a contraction of 'I am not', which is present continuous and does not fit here. The correct response is 'No, I don't' to indicate the habitual action of not making a list.

× I never make a lift.

✓ I never make a list.

The word 'lift' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is 'list'. This is a vocabulary error affecting sentence meaning and structure. Correcting 'lift' to 'list' makes the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.

× When I show becauses I purchase.

✓ When I shop because I purchase.

The sentence is unclear and contains incorrect word usage. 'Show' should be 'shop', and 'becauses' is incorrect; it should be 'because'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and confusing. A better sentence would be 'I don't make a list when I shop because I purchase directly.' However, to keep close to the original, correcting the words improves clarity.

× To go to shop.

✓ To go shopping.

The phrase 'to go to shop' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'to go shopping' which uses the gerund form to indicate the activity. This correction improves grammatical accuracy and naturalness.

× Yes, I make a list of my work because I am learning English language.

✓ Yes, I make a list of my work because I am learning the English language.

The phrase 'English language' requires the definite article 'the' before it. This is an article error. Adding 'the' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Before going to abroad.

✓ Before going abroad.

The preposition 'to' is unnecessary before 'abroad'. The correct phrase is 'going abroad'. Removing 'to' corrects the prepositional error.

× For study.

✓ To study.

The phrase 'For study' is incomplete and incorrect. The correct infinitive form 'to study' should be used to express purpose.

× Better.

✓ It is better.

The single word 'Better' is a sentence fragment lacking a subject and verb. Adding 'It is' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× Some people don't like to make a list because people have a reminder.

✓ Some people don't like making a list because they have a reminder.

After verbs like 'like', the gerund form ('making') is preferred over the infinitive ('to make'). Also, 'people' is repeated unnecessarily; replacing the second 'people' with 'they' improves clarity.

× Things in their mind.

✓ Things in their minds.

The phrase 'in their mind' should be plural 'in their minds' because 'their' refers to multiple people, each having their own mind. This is a singular and plural issue.

× I prefer to make a list on a paper or a mobile phone in both becauses if paper was lossed we see a list on a mobile phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper or on a mobile phone because if the paper is lost, we can see the list on the mobile phone.

The article 'a' before 'paper' is incorrect because 'paper' is uncountable here. Also, 'becauses' is incorrect; it should be 'because'. 'Lossed' is not a word; the correct past participle is 'lost'. The sentence structure is awkward and needs correction for clarity and grammar.