List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more coherent and clear by using complete sentences and linking words. Avoid fragmented phrases and unclear references. For example, explain why you make a list and how it helps you, using linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I definitely make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, my mom once asked me to buy many items from the supermarket, so I wrote them down to avoid forgetting anything.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and lacks structure. Try to answer directly and use linking words to explain your method of organizing work. Use complete sentences and avoid incomplete thoughts.

Ejemplo: Normally, I don't make a list for my work because I try to stay organized by focusing on one task at a time. This way, I avoid taking on too many tasks at once and can finish each task properly.

Sugerencia: Improve clarity by using complete sentences and linking words. Explain reasons clearly and avoid fragmented phrases. For example, use 'because' to connect ideas and express opinions smoothly.

Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they become overwhelmed about what to include. Also, they might get frustrated by having to write down everything they need to do.

Sugerencia: Try to avoid repetition and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, clarify your preference clearly and explain reasons in complete sentences.

Ejemplo: Generally speaking, I prefer making lists on my phone because it is easier and more convenient to access. Since I always carry my phone with me, I don't have to worry about losing the list like I might with paper.

× I have to keep my mind. Alarmed at and in order not to forget anything.

✓ I have to keep my mind alert in order not to forget anything.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Combining the fragments into a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Also my mom. Once to get a lot of his stuff from the supermarket, so I have to write it down in order not to forget anything.

✓ Also, my mom once bought a lot of her stuff from the supermarket, so I have to write it down in order not to forget anything.

The pronouns 'his' and the fragmented sentence cause confusion. Correcting pronouns to match the subject and restructuring the sentence improves clarity.

× Well, normally I don't do so as I try as much as I can to come to be organized, to not end, to not take a lot of tasks.

✓ Well, normally I don't do so because I try as much as I can to be organized and not take on a lot of tasks.

The original sentence is awkward and contains unclear phrases. Rephrasing for clarity and grammatical correctness is necessary.

× Is all that a moment.

✓ It's all about the moment.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding the subject and verb forms a complete sentence.

× Then I began to finish task by task.

✓ Then I begin to finish tasks one by one.

The tense should be present to match the context, and 'task' should be plural. Also, 'task by task' is better expressed as 'one by one'.

× So I don't throw myself with a lot of exercises or.

✓ So I don't overwhelm myself with a lot of tasks.

The original sentence is incomplete and uses 'exercises' incorrectly. Correcting the phrase to 'overwhelm myself with a lot of tasks' makes it clear and grammatically correct.

× I don't know, maybe they. Become overwhelmed with what to write down an what not to be written in there at last.

✓ I don't know, maybe they become overwhelmed with what to write down and what not to write in the list.

The sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect verb forms. Combining fragments and correcting verb forms improves clarity.

× Maybe I am they just got first gets frustrated with the fact that they have to write down everything.

✓ Maybe they just get frustrated with the fact that they have to write down everything.

The original sentence is confusing and contains unnecessary words. Simplifying the sentence improves clarity and correctness.

× Generally speaking, I I I prefer making less on my phone.

✓ Generally speaking, I prefer making lists on my phone.

'Less' is incorrectly used here; the correct word is 'lists'. Also, removing repeated words improves clarity.

× And the wild the paper, I can just lose it.

✓ And with paper, I can just lose it.

'Wild' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'with'. This correction clarifies the meaning.