List— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clear linking words. Try to make your response more concise and use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating the same idea in different ways.

Ejemplo: Yes, I prefer to make a list when I shop because it helps me remember the items I need to buy, so shopping becomes more convenient and efficient.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use linking words like 'and' or 'because' to connect your ideas clearly. Also, try to use correct sentence structures to improve clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often make a list for my work because it helps me remember my tasks and the order in which I need to complete them, so it is very helpful for me.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using more precise linking words like 'because' and 'therefore'. Also, try to avoid informal phrases like 'plus' and use more formal connectors to sound natural.

Ejemplo: Some people do not like making lists because they think it is time-consuming, and others have a sharp memory, so they believe lists are unnecessary for them.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some unclear parts and informal language. Avoid using fillers like 'R Plus' and contractions like ''cause' in formal speaking. Use clear linking words such as 'because' and ensure your sentences are complete and grammatically correct.

Ejemplo: I usually prefer to make a list on my phone because I always carry it with me, whereas paper lists can be easily lost or forgotten.

× Yes, I prefer to make list when I shop as it helps me to remember the things I want to buy a Plus it can be really convenient if I make a list so that I could particularly remember. About the things I want to purchase.

✓ Yes, I prefer to make a list when I shop as it helps me to remember the things I want to buy. Plus, it can be really convenient if I make a list so that I can particularly remember the things I want to purchase.

The word 'list' is countable and singular here, so it needs the article 'a' before it. Also, the sentence was fragmented and needed to be combined properly for clarity. Using 'could' is incorrect here; 'can' fits better to express ability in present tense.

× Yes, I prefer to make list when I shop as it helps me to remember the things I want to buy a Plus it can be really convenient if I make a list so that I could particularly remember. About the things I want to purchase.

✓ Yes, I prefer to make a list when I shop as it helps me to remember the things I want to buy. Plus, it can be really convenient if I make a list so that I can particularly remember the things I want to purchase.

The modal verb 'could' is used incorrectly here to express present ability. 'Can' is the correct modal verb to express present ability or possibility.

× Some people don't really like making list as they might think that it is a time consuming process.

✓ Some people don't really like making lists as they might think that it is a time-consuming process.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making multiple lists. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× So making list is of no use for those people.

✓ So making lists is of no use for those people.

Again, 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making lists.

× I usually prefer to make a list on my phone as I always carry my phone with me. R Plus writing things on the paper can be a little hard to 'cause I might forget where I place the paper because phone is always with me.

✓ I usually prefer to make a list on my phone as I always carry my phone with me. Plus, writing things on paper can be a little hard because I might forget where I placed the paper since the phone is always with me.

The phrase 'on the paper' is incorrect; 'on paper' is the correct expression. Also, 'cause' should be 'because' for formal correctness. 'Place' should be in past tense 'placed' to match the past action. 'Phone' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific phone.

× I usually prefer to make a list on my phone as I always carry my phone with me. R Plus writing things on the paper can be a little hard to 'cause I might forget where I place the paper because phone is always with me.

✓ I usually prefer to make a list on my phone as I always carry my phone with me. Plus, writing things on paper can be a little hard because I might forget where I placed the paper since the phone is always with me.

The fragment 'R Plus' is incorrect and should be 'Plus' to connect ideas properly. Also, 'cause' is informal and should be replaced with 'because' for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, I often make a list for my work and it always works for me as I can. I remember what I want to do, plus making a list of my work has me to remember in which order I'm going to do my work, so it always helps for me.

✓ Yes, I often make a list for my work and it always works for me as I can remember what I want to do. Plus, making a list of my work helps me remember in which order I'm going to do my work, so it always helps me.

The phrase 'has me to remember' is incorrect; the correct form is 'helps me remember'. Also, 'helps for me' should be 'helps me'. The sentence 'I can. I remember' is fragmented and should be combined properly.