Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
No I don't like make a list when you shop. I usually make shop in my work.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, I usually make laced a with my work. I think make a list can help me decide work problem.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
I sing a song, people make list, have surprise.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I like her usefull necklace. I think a lot of young people used for make list. A lot of old people use paper make a list.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Puntuación: 30.0Sugerencia: 你的回答语法错误较多,表达不够清晰,建议学习正确的句子结构,并且直接回答问题,例如说明是否喜欢列购物清单。
Ejemplo: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy things spontaneously.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Puntuación: 25.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法和词汇错误,表达不明确。建议使用正确的句子结构,清楚说明是否制作工作清单及其效果。
Ejemplo: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me organize tasks and solve problems efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Puntuación: 10.0Sugerencia: 回答完全不相关且语法错误严重。建议理解问题后,给出合理的理由,并用完整句子表达。
Ejemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer to be spontaneous.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Puntuación: 20.0Sugerencia: 回答内容混乱且语法错误多。建议直接表达自己的偏好,并说明原因,使用连贯的句子。
Ejemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and easy to edit, unlike paper lists.
× No I don't like make a list when you shop.
✓ No, I don't like making a list when I shop.
动词like后面应接动名词形式making,而不是动词原形make。
× No I don't like make a list when you shop.
✓ No, I don't like making a list when I shop.
句中主语是第一人称,后面不应使用you,应使用I保持主语一致。
× I usually make shop in my work.
✓ I usually shop during my work.
原句结构混乱,make shop不符合英语表达,应改为shop作为动词,且表达时间用during my work更合适。
× Yes, I usually make laced a with my work.
✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work.
原句中laced a无意义,应为make a list,符合语境。
× I think make a list can help me decide work problem.
✓ I think making a list can help me solve work problems.
动词think后应接动名词making,且decide用法不当,应改为solve,work problem应为复数work problems。
× I sing a song, people make list, have surprise.
✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they find it surprising.
原句语法混乱,表达不清,需重组句子使其符合逻辑和语法。
× I like her usefull necklace.
✓ I like their useful apps.
原句中her和necklace与上下文不符,应指代年轻人使用的工具,改为their useful apps更合适。
× I like her usefull necklace.
✓ I like their useful apps.
usefull拼写错误,应为useful。
× A lot of old people use paper make a list.
✓ A lot of old people use paper to make a list.
use后接动词时应使用不定式to make,而不是直接用动词原形。