Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and direct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and filler words, and give one or two specific reasons with linking words (for example, “because” or “so”). Keep to a maximum of 3–4 short sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love singing because it helps me express my emotions and relax after a long day. For example, I often sing classical songs to calm myself, and I enjoy performing with friends because it makes me feel connected to others.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear timeline and specific learning sources. Use linking words (for example, “when”, “then”, “after that”) and remove hesitation. Mention particular shows, apps, or methods to make your answer more concrete.

Ejemplo: Yes. When I was a child I didn’t know how to sing properly, so I learned basic techniques by watching TV talent shows and online tutorials. Later, I practiced regularly using a mobile app that teaches breathing and pitch control.

Sugerencia: Answer directly: name a person or group and explain why with specific details. Use one linking phrase (for example, “because” or “especially”) and avoid confusing wording. Keep sentences short and logical.

Ejemplo: I would like to sing for my favourite band from my country, called Warface, because their music inspired me to start singing. I would also love to sing for The Weeknd, especially his slower songs, since I admire his vocal style.

Sugerencia: Use clear reasoning with specific examples. State your opinion clearly, then give two concise supporting points linked by words like “because” and “for example”. Avoid repetition and general statements without evidence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it helps people express emotions and reduces stress. For example, singing in a choir can create a sense of community, and singing alone can lift your mood after a hard day.

Sugerencia: Organise your answer: start with a direct statement, then list the types of music you enjoy using linking words like “especially” or “for example”. Be specific about what you like in singers (tone, emotion, technique) to add depth.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy listening to many types of music. I especially like classical and folk music, and I often listen to Bollywood singers because their voices are very expressive and powerful. For example, I admire singers who use strong emotion and clear tone.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer, then explain reasons briefly and clearly with linking words. If you plan to take lessons in the future, mention why and what you hope to improve (for example, breath control or pitch). Avoid contradictory phrases and reduce fillers.

Ejemplo: No, I haven’t taken formal singing lessons, because I feel confident singing on my own. However, I might take classes in the future to improve my breath control and pitch accuracy, which would help me perform better.

× I, I in fact, I love singing and I almost, I love all, all of the band in the world and the band music and classical music.

✓ I in fact love singing, and I like almost all bands in the world, including band music and classical music.

The student overuses personal pronouns and filler words causing unclear reference and redundancy. Simplify by using a single subject 'I' and remove repeated phrases. Use 'bands' (plural) to refer to musical groups and 'including' to link types of music. Suggestion: Practice concise sentences and avoid repeating the subject unnecessarily.

× And because it attracts me and I feel so much connected with music and singing.

✓ Because it attracts me, I feel very connected to music and singing.

'So much' is informal and awkward here; 'very' is more appropriate. Use the preposition 'connected to' rather than 'connected with' in this context. Also combine clauses to improve fluency. Suggestion: Use 'connected to' and choose proper adverb intensity like 'very'.

× So that's why I feel so much interactive and also very special in singing.

✓ So I feel very engaged and special when I sing.

'Interactive' is incorrect to describe a person's feeling; 'engaged' or 'involved' fits. 'In singing' is better expressed as 'when I sing.' Remove 'so much' and use 'very' for clarity. Suggestion: Match adjectives to the intended meaning and pair actions with 'when'.

× Yeah, when I was a child, I, I didn't know how to sing properly or to sing, how to voice over or moreover all, all over the thing I didn't know about.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't know how to sing properly or how to do voice-over work; I didn't know about many aspects of singing.

The original is repetitive and ungrammatical. Use simple past 'didn't know' consistently and parallel structures 'how to sing' and 'how to do voice-over work.' Replace vague 'moreover all' with 'many aspects of singing.' Suggestion: Use parallel infinitive forms and concise expressions.

× And then I learned something from I learned from TV, from many TV shows.

✓ Then I learned from TV, from many TV shows.

Remove the repeated phrase 'I learned' and unnecessary preposition usage. 'Learned from TV' is sufficient. Suggestion: Avoid redundant repetitions and keep source phrases compact.

× I saw many videos on phone, mobile and I relate myself.

✓ I watched many videos on my mobile phone and I related to them.

Use 'watched' rather than 'saw' for viewing videos, specify 'my mobile phone' for clarity, and use 'relate to' (phrasal verb) not 'relate myself.' Suggestion: Learn common verb + preposition collocations like 'relate to.'

× If I have to say who do I sing for it would be the IT would be for the for the singer of my own country that I listened to his music more long for band.

✓ If I had to say who I sing for, it would be a singer from my country whose band I've listened to for a long time.

The original mixes question word order with a conditional and contains word-order errors. Use conditional 'If I had to say' and normal subject-verb order 'who I sing for.' Replace 'listened to his music more long for band' with 'whose band I've listened to for a long time.' Suggestion: Use correct conditional forms and relative clauses for clarity.

× His band name is Warface and they are awesome and creative singers.

✓ His band's name is Warface, and they are an awesome, creative group of musicians.

'They are awesome and creative singers' mismatches 'band' with 'singers.' Use 'band's name' and 'group of musicians' or 'band members' for agreement. Add comma between adjectives. Suggestion: Match collective nouns with appropriate descriptors.

× And if I have to say specific singer I'll go for the weekend.

✓ If I have to name a specific singer, I'll choose The Weeknd.

'Go for the weekend' is incorrect; likely refers to the singer 'The Weeknd.' Capitalize and spell correctly. Use 'name' or 'choose' for clarity. Suggestion: Use precise names and correct spelling.

× Yeah, obviously I think singing can bring happiness to people because it it shows emotions and it also control the thinking power and also it connect people by its own power.

✓ I think singing can bring happiness to people because it shows emotions, helps control thoughts, and connects people by its own power.

Remove duplicate 'it', use 'helps control thoughts' instead of 'control the thinking power', and use 'connects' (third person singular) to agree with 'it.' Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement and avoid repetition.

× And singing is one of the best healing thing ever exist in this world.

✓ Singing is one of the best healing things that exist in this world.

Use plural 'things' after 'one of the,' and include relative clause 'that exist.' Also 'ever exist' is ungrammatical; 'that exist' suffices. Suggestion: Remember 'one of the' requires a plural noun.

× So I think singing can bring happiness to people, to people and also every people should listen.

✓ So I think singing can bring happiness to people, and everyone should listen.

'Every people' is incorrect; use 'everyone' or 'every person.' Remove repeated 'to people.' Suggestion: Use 'everyone' for singular collective reference.

× Yeah, I I almost hear every types of music.

✓ I listen to almost every type of music.

Use 'listen to' rather than 'hear' for habitual preference, and 'every type' (singular) or 'all types' (plural). Also remove repeated 'I.' Suggestion: Use correct verb collocations and noun number with 'every.'

× I mostly hear the listen, the classical music, the folk music and also the Bollywood music.

✓ I mostly listen to classical music, folk music, and Bollywood music.

Remove extra words 'the listen' and use 'listen to' with a list of music genres without definite articles unless specific. Suggestion: Use parallel list structure and correct verb-preposition 'listen to.'

× And sometimes it's in Holly music.

✓ And sometimes I listen to Hollywood music.

'Holly music' is unclear; likely meant 'Hollywood' (film music) or 'holy' (religious). Assuming 'Hollywood,' rephrase to 'I listen to Hollywood music.' Suggestion: Use correct genre names.

× But I mostly like the Holly singers because they are magnificent and their voice are too good and I love them.

✓ But I mostly like the Hollywood singers because they are magnificent and their voices are very good.

Use plural 'voices' to match 'singers' and 'very good' instead of 'too good.' Remove redundant 'I love them.' Suggestion: Ensure noun-verb number agreement and avoid filler intensifiers like 'too' with positive descriptions.

× No, I never have taken a singing class, but I don't think so it would it would important or like I need it.

✓ No, I have never taken a singing class, but I don't think it would be necessary for me.

Use present perfect 'have never taken.' Remove duplicated phrases and use 'necessary' instead of 'important or like I need it.' Suggestion: Use concise modality 'would be necessary' for hypothetical evaluation.

× I need this because I'm quite enough confident to sing and also I'm a vocalist to a much good to sing a song.

✓ I don't need it because I'm confident enough to sing, and I'm already a vocalist capable of singing well.

Original has double negatives and incorrect adverb placement. Use 'confident enough' and 'capable of singing well.' Ensure logical coherence: if they don't think class necessary, phrase accordingly. Suggestion: Place 'enough' after adjective and use 'capable of' for ability.

× And if I have to take I'll take in the future, but at now I'm not taking any singing class.

✓ If I decide to take one, I'll take a class in the future, but right now I'm not taking any singing classes.

Use 'decide to take' for clarity, 'right now' instead of 'at now,' and plural 'classes' or 'a class.' Maintain future tense 'I'll take.' Suggestion: Use standard time expressions 'right now' and consistent number agreement.