Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "helps me to reduce my stress levels" and "engage me in the activity which is more enjoyable". Instead, combine ideas smoothly using linking words and more natural expressions.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and makes the activity enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Your answer needs better grammar and clearer structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, correct phrases like "listen her" to "listen to her" and clarify your learning method.

Ejemplo: I haven't taken formal lessons yet, but I have been learning to sing by listening repeatedly to a well-known singer named Myth Cara, whose sweet voice inspires me to improve my skills.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details. Avoid vague phrases and incorrect words like "Akademik area" and "pray for writing songs which is a scale".

Ejemplo: I want to sing for myself because I have achieved academic success and believe I can accomplish great things in music. I also hope to write songs inspired by different songwriters.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear, especially the last sentence. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. Singing can bring joy and help people maintain a positive outlook on life because it expresses emotions and connects us with others.

× Yes, I definitely enjoy singing as it helps me to reduce my stress levels and also engage me in the activity which is more enjoyable.

✓ Yes, I definitely enjoy singing as it helps me to reduce my stress levels and also engages me in the activity which is more enjoyable.

The verb 'engage' should be in the third person singular form 'engages' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue involving verb + -ing form usage.

× She has such a sweet voice and I listen her again and again and I usually try my best to improve my singing skills just by listening her.

✓ She has such a sweet voice and I listen to her again and again and I usually try my best to improve my singing skills just by listening to her.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. Omitting 'to' is incorrect. Therefore, 'listen her' should be 'listen to her'.

× I haven't hired a mentor yet, but I used to learn singing from a well known singer named the Myth Cara.

✓ I haven't hired a mentor yet, but I used to learn singing from a well-known singer named Myth Cara.

The phrase 'well known' should be hyphenated as 'well-known' when used as a compound adjective before a noun. Also, the article 'the' before 'Myth Cara' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× I usually try my best to improve my singing skills just by listening her.

✓ I usually try my best to improve my singing skills just by listening to her.

As explained earlier, 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the pronoun object. The pronoun 'her' is correct, but it must be preceded by 'to'.

× I want to sing for myself as I have achieved something in my life in my Akademik area and I found that I can do something great in my life and I will definitely do do that.

✓ I want to sing for myself as I have achieved something in my academic area, and I have found that I can do something great in my life, and I will definitely do that.

The sentence has repetition ('do do'), incorrect capitalization ('Akademik' should be 'academic'), and lacks proper punctuation to separate ideas. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× And I also pray for writing songs which is a scale and I developed by seeing it from their different writers.

✓ And I also pray for writing songs, which is a skill I developed by learning from different writers.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect prepositions and word choices. 'Scale' is likely a typo for 'skill', and 'seeing it from their different writers' is incorrect; 'learning from different writers' is appropriate.

× And I think her singing is the source of happiness. Too many people.

✓ And I think her singing is the source of happiness for many people.

The phrase 'Too many people' is incomplete and unclear. It should be connected properly to the previous sentence to convey the intended meaning. Also, 'her singing' is correct here.