Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn để diễn đạt ý tưởng của mình.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it is my talent and it helps me connect with others. Many people appreciate my singing, which makes me feel loved and confident.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng cấu trúc ngữ pháp đúng và từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách rõ ràng.

Ejemplo: No, I have never learned how to sing formally. I usually sing naturally without any formal training or guidance from a teacher.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cách diễn đạt còn lủng củng và nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và dùng từ vựng phù hợp để làm câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: I want to sing for my mom because she is a very kind person who has always supported me. Singing for her would be my way to thank her for everything she has done.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng hay nhưng bị ảnh hưởng bởi lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ vựng phù hợp để truyền đạt ý tưởng hiệu quả hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it is an invisible bond that connects everyone, regardless of their background or language. Singing together helps people feel connected and joyful.

× Yes, of course I very like singing because singing is my talent and that's why I can connect what everyones an make.

✓ Yes, of course I like singing very much because singing is my talent and that's why I can connect with what everyone can make.

The adverb 'very' is incorrectly placed before the verb 'like'. In English, 'very' is used to modify adjectives or other adverbs, not verbs. The correct phrase is 'like very much'. Also, 'everyones an make' is unclear and corrected to 'everyone can make'. Additionally, 'connect what' should be 'connect with what'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, of course I very like singing because singing is my talent and that's why I can connect what everyones an make.

✓ Yes, of course I like singing very much because singing is my talent and that's why I can connect with what everyone can make.

The phrase 'everyones an make' is incorrect pronoun and verb usage. 'Everyones' should be 'everyone' and 'an make' should be 'can make'. Also, 'connect what' should be 'connect with what' to correctly use the preposition with the verb 'connect'.

× Everyone knows my my. Benefit my talent and they will love me.

✓ Everyone knows my benefit from my talent and they will love me.

The sentence 'Everyone knows my my.' is incomplete and unclear. It seems to be a fragment. The correction combines the ideas into a complete sentence: 'Everyone knows my benefit from my talent and they will love me.' This improves sentence structure and clarity.

× No, I have her learn how to singed nor formally.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing formally.

The phrase 'have her learn' is incorrect; it should be 'have never learned'. 'Singed' is the past tense of 'sing', but the correct past participle is 'sung'. Also, 'nor formally' is incorrect; 'formally' is the correct adverb here. The corrected sentence uses the present perfect tense correctly and proper adverb placement.

× I usually sing using my natural voice without thinking in LS and tour guide and by teacher.

✓ I usually sing using my natural voice without thinking about LS, tour guides, or teachers.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used; it should be 'about' when referring to thinking regarding something. Also, 'and by teacher' is unclear and corrected to 'or teachers' to indicate the absence of formal instruction.

× I want to sing for my mom because she very very kind of person who ever support me when I'm saying in every stay.

✓ I want to sing for my mom because she is a very kind person who always supports me when I'm singing in every stage.

The pronoun 'she' needs the verb 'is' to form the correct sentence. 'Very very kind of person' should be 'a very kind person'. 'Who ever support me' should be 'who always supports me' to match singular subject and correct adverb. 'Saying in every stay' is likely 'singing in every stage'.

× I want to sing for my mom because she very very kind of person who ever support me when I'm saying in every stay.

✓ I want to sing for my mom because she is a very kind person who always supports me when I'm singing on every stage.

The adverb 'very' is repeated unnecessarily; one 'very' is sufficient. The verb 'support' should be 'supports' to agree with singular subject 'she'. 'Saying' should be 'singing'. 'In every stay' should be 'on every stage' for correct preposition and meaning.

× So I wonder single heard to thank for everything she did for me.

✓ So I want to sing to thank her for everything she has done for me.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors. 'Wonder single heard' is incorrect; likely intended 'want to sing'. 'Thank for everything she did for me' needs the object 'her' and the present perfect tense 'has done' for completed actions relevant to the present.

× Penis to people yes I do think singing can bring happiness to people because isak assen invisible points that connect everyone no matter who you are, no matter was language you're speaking or where you come from.

✓ Yes, I do think singing can bring happiness to people because it is an invisible force that connects everyone no matter who you are, no matter what language you're speaking or where you come from.

The phrase 'Penis to people' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo for 'Yes, to people'. 'Isak assen invisible points' is unclear and corrected to 'it is an invisible force'. 'Was language' should be 'what language'. These corrections fix pronoun misuse and improve clarity.

× They can sing each other as connect cancan happy with each other.

✓ They can sing to each other and connect, sharing happiness with each other.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Sing each other as connect cancan happy with each other' is not grammatically correct. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence expressing the intended meaning.