Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'Under helps me'. Try to use clearer expressions and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me feel relaxed and comfortable. Moreover, it provides relief from stress and lifts my mood.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains confusing phrases such as 'being a bathroom single' and 'had an edited from my parents'. Please try to express your ideas clearly and directly. Use simple sentences and correct grammar to convey your message effectively.

Ejemplo: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I enjoy singing in the bathroom, which I think I inherited from my parents.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows good content but has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'Is most valueable' and 'sing for them unlocked'. Try to use correct sentence structures and linking words to make your answer coherent and natural.

Ejemplo: I would love to sing for my parents because they have worked very hard for me and always trusted me. It is very valuable to me, and I would even like to compose a song especially for them.

Sugerencia: Your answer has a good idea but the sentence structure is awkward and some phrases are unclear, such as 'make the way out for the feelings'. Try to use simpler and clearer expressions with proper linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I firmly believe that singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their suppressed feelings and emotions.

× Under helps me to get relief from distress.

✓ It helps me to get relief from distress.

The word 'Under' is incorrectly used here as a preposition. The correct subject pronoun 'It' should be used to refer to singing, which is the subject of the sentence.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

The verb 'learnt' is a British English past tense form, while 'learned' is the American English form. Both are correct, but consistency is important. Since 'learned' is used later, it is better to use 'learned' here for consistency.

× Well, no, I have never learned to sing, but yes, being a bathroom single it does a quality that I had an edited from my parents.

✓ Well, no, I have never learned to sing, but yes, being a bathroom singer is a quality that I inherited from my parents.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'bathroom single' should be 'bathroom singer'; 'it does a quality' is incorrect and should be 'is a quality'; 'I had an edited' is incorrect and should be 'I inherited'. The sentence structure is confusing and needs correction for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Is most valueable and I would love to sing for them unlocked.

✓ It is most valuable and I would love to sing for them aloud.

The sentence is missing the subject pronoun 'It' at the beginning. 'Valueable' is misspelled and should be 'valuable'. 'Unlocked' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'aloud' meaning to sing out loud.

× I would love to sing for my parents because of the hard work they have put into me and the trust they show in me.

✓ I would love to sing for my parents because of the hard work they have put into raising me and the trust they show in me.

The phrase 'put into me' is awkward and incorrect. The correct expression is 'put into raising me' to indicate the effort parents invest in upbringing.

× Well, yes, I firmly believe that singing and bring happiness to the people as it will help to make the way out for the feelings of the person which are suppressed by him.

✓ Well, yes, I firmly believe that singing can bring happiness to people as it helps to find a way out for the feelings that a person suppresses.

The sentence has pronoun errors: 'singing and bring' should be 'singing can bring'; 'make the way out' is incorrect, should be 'find a way out'; 'the feelings of the person which are suppressed by him' is awkward and should be 'the feelings that a person suppresses' for clarity and correctness.