Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains several grammatical errors and unclear phrases, such as 'seeing' instead of 'singing'. Try to form complete sentences and avoid pauses or fillers. Also, provide a clear reason with linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really like singing because it helps me feel more comfortable and relieves stress after a long day.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and contains many incomplete sentences and incorrect grammar. Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details using linking words. Avoid unrelated or unclear phrases.

Ejemplo: Actually, I have never taken formal singing lessons, but I really enjoy singing along when I listen to music. I would like to learn how to sing properly in the future.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions like 'say' instead of 'sing' and 'state alone' instead of 'stay alone'. Use complete sentences and clarify your ideas with linking words.

Ejemplo: Actually, I am pretty shy about singing in front of other people, so I usually sing only when I am alone.

Sugerencia: Your answer has many grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to express your opinion clearly with correct grammar and provide specific reasons or examples using linking words to support your answer.

Ejemplo: Of course, singing always brings happiness to people. It is one of the best ways to relieve stress and relax, especially when someone is feeling very stressed.

× Yes. I really like seeing.

✓ Yes. I really like singing.

The student mistakenly wrote 'seeing' instead of 'singing'. The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form of the verb that matches the intended meaning. Here, 'singing' is correct because the question is about singing, not seeing.

× Actually, I haven't been ever learned.

✓ Actually, I have never learned.

The phrase 'haven't been ever learned' is incorrect. The present perfect tense should be 'have never learned' to indicate that the student has not learned singing up to now.

× A former. Singing lessons.

✓ I took singing lessons before.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks a verb. A complete sentence with subject and verb is needed to convey the meaning clearly.

× In fact, I really enjoyed seeing.

✓ In fact, I really enjoyed singing.

Again, 'seeing' is incorrect here. The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by the gerund form of the intended action, which is 'singing'.

× When listening. When music is on.

✓ I enjoy singing when music is on.

The original sentences are fragments. Combining them into a complete sentence clarifies the meaning.

× So in your eyes. I want to have a change. To learn.

✓ So, in your opinion, I want to have a chance to learn.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'In your eyes' is an incorrect idiom; 'in your opinion' is correct. 'Change' should be 'chance' to express opportunity.

× Actually I pretty shy when I have to say in front of other people.

✓ Actually, I am pretty shy when I have to speak in front of other people.

The verb 'am' is missing after 'I'. Also, 'say' should be 'speak' to correctly express talking in front of people.

× So you know. I just saying when I state alone.

✓ So, you know, I just sing when I stay alone.

'Saying' is incorrect; it should be 'singing' or 'sing'. Also, 'state' is incorrect; it should be 'stay'. The sentence needs to be combined for clarity.

× Sing always bring happiness to be.

✓ Singing always brings happiness to me.

The subject 'singing' is singular and requires the verb 'brings' (third person singular). Also, 'to be' is incorrect; it should be 'to me'.

× Singing is one way of the best way to.

✓ Singing is one of the best ways to.

The phrase 'one way of the best way' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'one of the best ways'.

× Relieve stress and relax when I have when I when someone, me or other people get something very Strat. There.

✓ It helps relieve stress and relax when I or someone else is very stressed.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear words like 'Strat'. It needs to be rewritten for clarity and correct grammar.