Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，例如“like saying”应为“like singing”，句子结构不完整且有重复。建议简化句子，确保语法正确，并用连词连接句子，使表达更自然流畅。

Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me feel relaxed and reduces stress when I am sad or anxious. Singing comforts me and makes me happier. I especially enjoy singing along with my favorite songs.

Sugerencia: 回答中时态和单复数使用不准确，如“primary school students”应为“primary school”。建议注意语法细节，使用连词连接句子，使表达更连贯。

Ejemplo: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in primary and secondary school because it was a required subject. However, at university, I did not take singing classes since I preferred to focus on my major.

Sugerencia: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子断裂且用词不准确，如“T V play and comics”应为“TV shows and comics”。建议使用完整句子，明确表达意图，并用连词连接句子。

Ejemplo: I would like to sing for my favorite characters from TV shows and comics. They often have unique music, and I want to learn and sing their songs to show my admiration.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，如“Sing”应为“singing”，“more happier”重复比较级。建议注意语法正确性，使用连贯的句子表达观点。

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. When I sing with my friends, we feel happier than usual. Moreover, singing for others during their sad times can also cheer them up.

× Yes, I like saying it can only help me feel relaxed, but also reduce the stress when I feel sad and anxious.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it can not only help me feel relaxed, but also reduce the stress when I feel sad and anxious.

动词后面应该用动名词形式，like后面接动名词singing，而不是saying。这里的错误是动词形式错误。

× Singing can better comfort myself.

✓ Singing can comfort me better.

句子结构不正确，better应放在动词后面修饰动词，且myself用法不当，应该用宾格me。

× And can make me feel happier.

✓ It can also make me feel happier.

句子缺少主语，应该补充主语it，且连接词and改为also更合适。

× Move.

✓ (删除此句)

该句不完整且无意义，应删除。

× I prefer to sing along.

✓ I prefer to sing along.

该句无语法错误，保持不变。

× Yes, I learned how to sing when I was primary school students and secondary school students, as it is a required subject.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing when I was a primary school student and a secondary school student, as it was a required subject.

时态应保持一致，过去时learned后面描述过去身份时应使用单数形式student，并且后半句时态应为过去时was。

× However, in the university, I have never taken this as a necessity.

✓ However, at university, I have never taken this as a necessity.

介词使用错误，应该用at university而不是in the university。

× Although it is interesting, I prefer to focus on my major subject.

✓ Although it is interesting, I prefer to focus on my major subjects.

major subject通常用复数形式subjects，表示专业课程。

× Maybe I want to sing for my favorite characters when I watch T V play and comics.

✓ Maybe I want to sing for my favorite characters when I watch TV shows and read comics.

短语搭配错误，watch后应接TV shows而非TV play，且应加动词read搭配comics。

× My favorite characters may have a unique music.

✓ My favorite characters may have unique music.

music是不可数名词，前面不应加不定冠词a。

× Therefore, I want to learn this music and sing for them.

✓ Therefore, I want to learn this music and sing for them.

该句无语法错误，保持不变。

× To show my love.

✓ To show my love.

该句为不完整句，应与前句合并或补充主语和谓语。建议改为：I want to do this to show my love.

× Yes, I believe Sing can bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people.

Sing应为动名词singing，作为believe的宾语。

× When I singing with my friends, we will feel more happier than usual.

✓ When I sing with my friends, we feel happier than usual.

动词形式错误，should use base form sing after when，且more happier是重复比较，应去掉more。

× Moreover, when? We can sing for other peoples in their sad times.

✓ Moreover, we can sing for other people in their sad times.

句子中when?无意义，应删除；people是复数，不加s的复数形式。

× They may feel happier too.

✓ They may feel happier too.

该句无语法错误，保持不变。