Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear in parts. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons or examples. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing, especially when I am feeling happy or sad. Although I am not a professional singer, singing helps me express my emotions and relax. For example, I often sing in the shower to lift my mood.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Provide a clear topic sentence and explain your experience with singing lessons using specific details. Use linking words to organize your answer logically.

Ejemplo: No, I have never formally learned how to sing. When I was a child, my mother wanted to enroll me in a singing school, but for some reason, I did not attend the classes.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases. Try to clearly state who you like to sing for and why. Use specific examples and linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: Most of the time, I like to sing for myself because it helps me feel better in any situation. Sometimes, I also sing for my friends or boyfriend to show my love and affection.

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and linking words to improve fluency. Provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Ejemplo: Definitely, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. When we feel sad, listening to our favorite songs or singing ourselves can lift our mood and reduce feelings of depression.

× Do you like singing? Yeah, I like singing, though I'm a bathroom singer.

✓ Yes, I like singing, though I'm a bathroom singer.

The original sentence repeats the examiner's question 'Do you like singing?' unnecessarily. The student should respond directly to the question without repeating it.

× When I'm sad or when I am very happy, I see according to my mood.

✓ When I'm sad or very happy, I sing according to my mood.

The word 'see' is incorrect here; the student likely meant 'sing'. Also, 'when I am very happy' can be simplified to 'very happy'. The conjunction 'or' is used correctly.

× But I'm not proficient on my voice is not that much good ideas, but I tried to sing always.

✓ But I'm not proficient; my voice is not very good, but I always try to sing.

The phrase 'proficient on' is incorrect; 'proficient at' or simply 'not proficient' is better. 'Not that much good ideas' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'my voice is not very good'. The sentence structure is also improved for clarity.

× I'm actually not I not I don't even learn how to sing.

✓ Actually, I have not learned how to sing.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. The correct form uses present perfect tense 'have not learned' to indicate experience up to now.

× But in my childhood once my mom give me a chance to land.

✓ But in my childhood, once my mom gave me a chance to learn.

The verb 'give' should be in past tense 'gave' to match the past time frame. Also, 'land' is likely a typo for 'learn'.

× How could see he sent me a singing school but due to some reason I don't try it later.

✓ She sent me to a singing school, but for some reason, I didn't continue later.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. Correct subject pronoun 'she' is used, and the sentence is restructured for clarity and correct tense usage.

× Maximum time I want to sing for myself because I want to keep my Subs myself joliett at any situation and sometimes I sing for my friend or my boyfriend for sure love or affection to them.

✓ Most of the time, I want to sing for myself because I want to keep my spirits up in any situation, and sometimes I sing for my friends or my boyfriend to show love or affection to them.

'Maximum time' is incorrect; 'most of the time' is appropriate. 'Keep my Subs myself joliett' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or error; 'keep my spirits up' fits the context. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'sometimes'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correctness.

× Definitely. I think seeing can bring happiness to people in a situation when we feel sad, we can listen our favorite music or song from our playlist or we can see as our own for our happiness.

✓ Definitely. I think singing can bring happiness to people. When we feel sad, we can listen to our favorite music or songs from our playlist, or we can sing ourselves for happiness.

'Seeing' is a typo for 'singing'. 'Listen our favorite music' should be 'listen to our favorite music'. 'See as our own' is incorrect; it should be 'sing ourselves'. The sentence is corrected for vocabulary and preposition use.

× It helps us to reduce depression or set.

✓ It helps us to reduce depression or stress.

The word 'set' is incorrect in this context; likely the intended word is 'stress'. The sentence is corrected accordingly.