Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các câu không hoàn chỉnh và lỗi ngữ pháp như "'Cause" và "my not so good to them". Hãy cố gắng nói rõ ràng, mạch lạc và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.

Ejemplo: I love singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. However, I usually avoid singing in front of many people because I am afraid my voice might not sound good to them. Therefore, I often practice singing at home to improve my skills and gain more confidence.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu, tránh các lỗi như "I quiet I prefer" và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng, sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: No, I haven't learned how to sing formally because I consider it just a hobby. Also, I feel shy singing in front of many people. I usually prefer to be alone and read books, so singing remains a small pastime for me.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không hoàn chỉnh, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: I want to sing for the people closest to me, such as my parents and best friends. They always support me and give me confidence to keep singing. Sometimes, we sing together, which helps improve our relationship.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh các câu không hoàn chỉnh và sử dụng từ nối để liên kết ý tưởng. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp các chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời sinh động.

Ejemplo: Of course, I believe singing brings happiness to people. Many fans are willing to spend money to attend their idol's concerts to hear them sing. Singing together creates a strong connection between the singer and the audience, making everyone feel joyful and united.

× I usually go for singing in front of many people.

✓ I usually go singing in front of many people.

The phrase 'go for singing' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'go singing' to indicate the activity one engages in. 'Go' is followed by the verb in the '-ing' form without 'for'.

× 'Cause I'm afraid my voice my not so good to them.

✓ 'Cause I'm afraid my voice may not be so good to them.

The sentence has a typo 'my' instead of 'may' and lacks the verb 'be' after 'may not'. The correct modal verb usage is 'may not be'.

× Sometimes. I practice singing and art at home to improve my skills and gain more confidence.

✓ Sometimes, I practice singing and art at home to improve my skills and gain more confidence.

A period is incorrectly used after 'Sometimes'. It should be a comma to connect the adverbial phrase to the main clause.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

Both 'learnt' and 'learned' are past tense forms, but 'learned' is preferred in American English, which fits the context better.

× I just consider it as a. One of my hobby and I do not want to shy in front of many people.

✓ I just consider it as one of my hobbies and I do not want to be shy in front of many people.

'One of my hobby' should be 'one of my hobbies' (plural). Also, 'want to shy' is incorrect; it should be 'want to be shy'.

× I quiet I prefer to be alone and reading some books so singing is just a small hobby.

✓ I quite prefer to be alone and read some books, so singing is just a small hobby.

'Quiet' is a typo for 'quite'. Also, 'reading' should be 'read' to maintain parallel structure with 'prefer'.

× I want to sing to the closest one to me if I support like my parents are my.

✓ I want to sing to the closest ones to me, like my parents who support me.

'Closest one' should be plural 'closest ones' to match 'my parents'. The sentence structure is awkward and incomplete; it needs rephrasing for clarity.

× Best friends 'cause they couldn't talk to me and always gives me the confidence to continue to sing that song.

✓ My best friends because they always talk to me and give me the confidence to continue singing that song.

The original sentence is fragmented and has incorrect verb forms. 'Couldn't talk to me' contradicts the intended meaning. 'Gives' should be 'give' to agree with plural subject 'friends'. Also, 'continue to sing' can be 'continue singing'.

× And sometime we can sing together to improve, to improve our relationship.

✓ And sometimes we can sing together to improve our relationship.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. The phrase 'to improve' is repeated unnecessarily.

× many people are willing to spend their money to fund their idol concert to hear them.

✓ many people are willing to spend their money to attend their idol's concert to hear them.

'Fund their idol concert' is incorrect; people usually 'attend' concerts. Also, 'idol concert' should be 'idol's concert' to show possession.

× And singing together with the fan communication.

✓ And singing together with the fans creates communication.

The phrase is incomplete and unclear. 'Fan communication' is vague; adding 'creates communication' clarifies the meaning.

× After the course at every one feels really happy and one of combined.

✓ After the concert, everyone feels really happy and united.

'Course' should be 'concert'. 'At every one' is incorrect; it should be 'everyone'. 'One of combined' is ungrammatical; 'united' conveys the intended meaning.