Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to give a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, followed by specific reasons or examples. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. I try to sing a song every day to improve my skills and lift my mood.

Sugerencia: Your answer is brief and somewhat unclear. Provide a direct response and add supporting details using linking words to make your answer more complete and natural.

Ejemplo: No, I haven't had formal singing lessons, but I enjoy singing in my free time and often practice by listening to my favourite songs.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and lacks focus. Clearly state who you want to sing for and explain why, using linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I would like to sing for my family because they always support me. Also, I admire many famous singers for their talent and hope to perform like them one day.

Sugerencia: Your answer is positive but repetitive. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it acts like medicine for the mind. Moreover, it helps improve mental strength and overall well-being.

× I want to sing a song every day. When I was.

✓ I want to sing a song every day. When I was younger, I used to sing a lot.

The sentence 'When I was.' is incomplete and lacks a main verb or complement, resulting in a sentence structure error. To correct it, provide a complete clause such as 'When I was younger, I used to sing a lot.' This gives context and completes the thought.

× But I'm singing songs.

✓ But I like singing songs.

The phrase 'I'm singing songs' is present continuous, which implies an action happening right now. However, the context suggests a general liking, so the gerund form 'I like singing songs' is more appropriate to express habitual action or preference.

× I like a lot of artist.

✓ I like a lot of artists.

The word 'artist' is singular, but 'a lot of' requires a plural noun to indicate many individuals. Therefore, 'artists' is the correct plural form to use here.

× So I like him.

✓ So I like them.

The student refers to 'a lot of artists' (plural), but uses the singular pronoun 'him'. The correct pronoun to refer to multiple people is 'them'.

× Just humor and his voices are very good, very brilliant.

✓ Their humour and voices are very good, very brilliant.

The sentence refers to multiple artists, so the plural possessive pronoun 'their' should be used instead of 'his'. Also, 'humor' should be 'humour' in British English.

× I want to see him, I want to see his songs.

✓ I want to see him perform, and I want to listen to his songs.

The original sentence is a comma splice and lacks clarity. Separating into two clauses with 'and' and specifying 'perform' and 'listen to' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× Singing is very good medicine for everything.

✓ Singing is very good medicine for everything.

This sentence is grammatically correct and requires no correction.

× I believe singing will help us to improve overall. Mental strength and happiness.

✓ I believe singing will help us to improve overall mental strength and happiness.

The original sentence is split incorrectly, creating a sentence fragment 'Mental strength and happiness.' Combining it into one sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.