Part 1
Examinador
Do you like singing? Why?
Candidato
I don't like staying because I can sing well.
Examinador
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Candidato
Yes, I learned singing class. In score. Bob, I can't singing well.
Examinador
Who do you want to sing for?
Candidato
My friends because my friends lonely so I want to singing for my favorite.
Examinador
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Candidato
Yes, because I. Can bring hapiness. For a scene.
Do you like singing? Why?
Puntuación: 20.0Sugerencia: 답변이 질문에 적절히 응답하지 않고 문법적으로도 부정확합니다. 질문에 직접적으로 답하고, 이유를 명확하게 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.
Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Puntuación: 15.0Sugerencia: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 간단하고 명확한 문장으로 과거 경험을 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.
Ejemplo: Yes, I have taken singing classes before, but I am still learning to improve my skills.
Who do you want to sing for?
Puntuación: 25.0Sugerencia: 문장이 어색하고 문법 오류가 많습니다. 질문에 직접 답하고, 이유를 명확하게 설명하는 문장 구조를 연습하세요.
Ejemplo: I want to sing for my friends because they sometimes feel lonely, and I hope my singing can cheer them up.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Puntuación: 20.0Sugerencia: 답변이 불완전하고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 명확한 이유와 구체적인 설명을 포함하여 완전한 문장으로 답변하는 연습이 필요합니다.
Ejemplo: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it helps people feel joyful and relaxed.
× I don't like staying because I can sing well.
✓ I don't like singing because I can't sing well.
The verb 'like' is typically followed by a gerund (-ing form) to express preference. 'Staying' is incorrect here; it should be 'singing' to match the context. Also, 'can sing well' contradicts the intended meaning, so it is corrected to 'can't sing well' to make sense.
× Yes, I learned singing class.
✓ Yes, I took a singing class.
The verb 'learned' is incorrectly used with 'singing class'. The correct expression is 'took a singing class' to indicate attendance. 'Learned' is a past tense verb but does not collocate with 'class' in this way.
× In score. Bob, I can't singing well.
✓ In school, Bob, I can't sing well.
'Can't singing' is incorrect; modal verbs like 'can't' should be followed by the base form of the verb, so 'sing' is correct. Also, 'score' is likely a typo for 'school'.
× My friends because my friends lonely so I want to singing for my favorite.
✓ My friends, because my friends are lonely, so I want to sing for my favorite.
'Want to singing' is incorrect; after 'want to', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'sing' is correct. Also, 'my friends lonely' lacks the verb 'are'.
× My friends because my friends lonely so I want to singing for my favorite.
✓ My friends are lonely, so I want to sing for my favorite.
The sentence lacks proper conjunction and verb agreement. Adding 'are' after 'my friends' and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.
× Yes, because I. Can bring hapiness. For a scene.
✓ Yes, because I can bring happiness to a scene.
The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. Combining the fragments into a complete sentence and correcting spelling ('hapiness' to 'happiness') improves clarity.