Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to use clearer and more natural expressions. For example, instead of 'get out from those stressful mathures', say 'escape from stressful moments'. Also, avoid redundancy like 'relieve myself from those distressing stuff'—you can say 'relieve stress'. Keep your answer concise and correct grammar.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love singing, especially when I am in the shower. It helps me escape from stressful moments and relieves my stress effectively.

Sugerencia: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Avoid repeating phrases like 'Thing is, is something that I enjoyed'. Instead, say 'It's something I enjoy during my free time'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: No, I have never learned how to sing because I prefer to keep it as a hobby. It's something I enjoy during my free time, and I don't feel the need to take formal classes.

Sugerencia: Clarify your ideas and correct grammar mistakes. For example, 'Sing for the first person' is unclear. You can say 'I want to sing for myself'. Also, 'achieved my girls' seems incorrect; perhaps you meant 'achieved my goals'. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: I want to sing for myself because I am grateful for how far I have come. Despite difficult and overwhelming moments, I kept going and finally achieved my goals. Singing for myself would be a way to celebrate.

Sugerencia: Use consistent pronouns and improve sentence flow. For example, replace 'your emotions' with 'their emotions' to match 'people'. Also, 'even set songs' is unclear; perhaps you meant 'even sad songs'. Use linking words like 'for instance' to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Personally, I believe singing brings happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and feel relaxed. For instance, singing happy songs can lift their mood, while even sad songs can help them recall special memories and feel connected to others.

× Yes, I love singing very much, especially during showering because I found it as a way for me to get out from those stressful mathures and it really helps me to relieve myself from those distressing stuff.

✓ Yes, I love singing very much, especially during showering because I find it as a way for me to get out from those stressful moments and it really helps me to relieve myself from those distressing stuff.

The verb 'found' is in the past tense, but the sentence context requires present tense to express a habitual action. 'Found' should be corrected to 'find' to match the present tense context.

× Yes, I love singing very much, especially during showering because I found it as a way for me to get out from those stressful mathures and it really helps me to relieve myself from those distressing stuff.

✓ Yes, I love singing very much, especially during showering because I find it as a way for me to get out from those stressful moments and it really helps me to relieve myself from those distressing things.

The word 'mathures' is incorrect and likely a misspelling of 'moments'. Also, 'stuff' is informal and uncountable; 'things' is more appropriate here to refer to distressing items.

× No, I have never learned how to sing because I prefer to keep it as my hobby.

✓ No, I have never learnt how to sing because I prefer to keep it as my hobby.

In British English, the past participle of 'learn' is 'learnt'. Since the transcript uses British English spelling ('learnt'), it is consistent to use 'learnt' instead of 'learned'.

× Thing is, is something that I enjoyed during my free time, but I don't feel the need to take formal classes for it.

✓ The thing is, singing is something that I enjoy during my free time, but I don't feel the need to take formal classes for it.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a clear subject. Adding 'The thing is, singing is' clarifies the subject and corrects the sentence structure.

× Sing for the first person. I want to sing for it as myself because I am so grateful for how far I have come, especially during those difficult an overwhelming moments.

✓ I want to sing for myself because I am so grateful for how far I have come, especially during those difficult and overwhelming moments.

'Sing for the first person' is unclear and incorrect. 'I want to sing for myself' correctly uses the reflexive pronoun. Also, 'an' should be 'and' to connect adjectives properly.

× I almost gave up but I kept going and finally achieved my girls.

✓ I almost gave up but I kept going and finally achieved my goals.

'Girls' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is 'goals'. This is a vocabulary error affecting meaning.

× To me personally, singing definitely brings happiness to people because it allows them to express your emotions and feel more relaxed.

✓ To me personally, singing definitely brings happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and feel more relaxed.

The pronoun 'your' is inconsistent with 'people' and 'them'. It should be 'their' to maintain agreement in third person plural.

× For example, singing happy songs can lift your mood, while even set songs can help your recall special memories and feel connected to others.

✓ For example, singing happy songs can lift your mood, while even sad songs can help you recall special memories and feel connected to others.

'Set songs' is incorrect; the intended word is 'sad songs'. Also, 'your recall' should be 'you recall' to maintain correct verb usage.