Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding incomplete sentences and redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words. For example, explain why you prefer singing in the bathroom and how it makes you feel.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing, but mostly when I am alone, especially in the bathroom. This is because singing there makes me feel relaxed and confident, as if I am performing like a professional singer. Moreover, it helps me calm down and enjoy my favourite songs.

Sugerencia: Make your answer more structured and clear by directly answering the question first. Use correct grammar and linking words to explain your wishes and plans. Avoid long, confusing sentences and be specific about your intentions.

Ejemplo: I have not formally learnt how to sing yet, but I have always wished to find time to practice. I hope to improve my voice and perform in front of a small audience someday to give them a good show.

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and coherent by using linking words and correcting grammar. Clearly state who you want to sing for and why, giving specific feelings and reasons.

Ejemplo: I would love to sing for my parents first because it would bring me great joy and pride. Learning this skill would allow me to entertain them and make us all feel happy while listening to my music.

Sugerencia: Make your answer clearer and more natural by using complete sentences and linking words. Explain the idea with specific details and avoid vague phrases. For example, mention how singing reduces stress and improves mood.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. Research shows that singing helps reduce stress hormones in the body, which can improve mood and promote relaxation.

× I do enjoy singing, especially not in public scenarios, but.

✓ I do enjoy singing, especially not in public places, though.

The phrase 'in public scenarios' is awkward and incorrect in this context. The correct preposition and noun phrase is 'in public places' to indicate locations where singing might occur. Also, 'but' at the end is incomplete; 'though' fits better to contrast the statement.

× I'm a big time bathroom single.

✓ I'm a big-time bathroom singer.

The word 'single' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'singer' to describe a person who sings. Also, 'big time' should be hyphenated as 'big-time' when used as a compound adjective.

× It gives me a feeling that I actually sing a song and the singer's voice, and it gives me a confidence and calming experience while singing my favorite song.

✓ It gives me a feeling that I am actually singing a song like a singer's voice, and it gives me confidence and a calming experience while singing my favorite song.

The sentence has awkward pronoun and article usage. 'Sing a song and the singer's voice' is unclear; it should be 'singing a song like a singer's voice.' Also, 'a confidence' is incorrect; 'confidence' is uncountable and does not need an article. Added 'a' before 'calming experience' for correctness.

× I'm always wished myself to make some time for myself and learn how to sing or at least try how to have a very good voice us to at least practice an have a small setting with an audience to give a good show to them.

✓ I have always wished to make some time for myself to learn how to sing or at least try to have a very good voice, and to at least practice and have a small setting with an audience to give a good show to them.

The phrase 'I'm always wished myself' is incorrect; the present perfect 'I have always wished' is appropriate. Also, 'try how to have' is incorrect; it should be 'try to have.' The phrase 'us to at least practice an have' is incorrect; it should be 'to at least practice and have.' The sentence needed restructuring for clarity and correct verb forms.

× I would love to dedicate a song sung by me to my parents first because that would give me your joy, an immense proud feeling that this is a skill which I learned for myself, but to entertain others and make us feel good listening to my music.

✓ I would love to dedicate a song sung by me to my parents first because that would give me great joy, an immense proud feeling that this is a skill which I learned for myself, but also to entertain others and make them feel good listening to my music.

The phrase 'give me your joy' is incorrect; it should be 'give me great joy.' Also, 'make us feel good' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'make them feel good' referring to others. The sentence needed pronoun corrections for clarity and correctness.

× According to some research by great institutions as singing or music on a broader level has a great impact on releasing stress hormones. Reduce stress hormones and fix body by a great chance.

✓ According to some research by great institutions, singing or music on a broader level has a great impact on reducing stress hormones and improving the body significantly.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper structure. 'As singing or music...' is incorrect; a comma is needed after 'institutions.' The phrase 'Reduce stress hormones and fix body by a great chance' is incomplete and unclear; it should be combined into one sentence with proper verbs: 'has a great impact on reducing stress hormones and improving the body significantly.'