Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm sai như "bad voiced" và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, dễ hiểu. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và có liên kết logic.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing very much, especially when I am alone. It helps me express myself freely because I feel shy to sing in front of my friends or family.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó giải thích ý kiến của bạn một cách rõ ràng và có liên kết. Tránh dùng những câu không hoàn chỉnh hoặc lặp từ.

Ejemplo: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in primary school. However, I believe singing is a talent that depends on your natural voice and ability.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và đảm bảo câu có cấu trúc đúng. Bạn nên giải thích rõ hơn về người bạn muốn hát cho và lý do.

Ejemplo: I want to sing at my wedding and also for my father. The song I choose is about both my parents, and I want to dedicate it to my whole family who has always supported me.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ ngữ không chính xác như "kid mode". Hãy dùng các liên từ để kết nối ý và giải thích cụ thể hơn về cách âm nhạc ảnh hưởng đến tâm trạng con người.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because the rhythm and mood of a song can lift people's spirits. That's why music is played in many places like restaurants to create a pleasant atmosphere.

× Despite my bad voiced, I always love singing especially when I am alone so that I can push out like the reporter be I can be myself because when I around my friends or my family.

✓ Despite my bad voice, I always love singing especially when I am alone so that I can express myself like a reporter and be myself because when I am around my friends or my family, I am very shy and I couldn't sing.

The phrase 'bad voiced' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'voice' not 'voiced'. Also, 'push out like the reporter be I can be myself' is unclear and grammatically incorrect; it should be 'express myself like a reporter and be myself'. Additionally, 'when I around' lacks the verb 'am'. The sentence also needs proper punctuation and conjunctions for clarity.

× Yes, when I was a kid, like in primary school, all of us are like all about learned how to sing.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid, like in primary school, all of us learned how to sing.

The phrase 'are like all about learned' is incorrect. The past tense 'learned' should be used directly without 'are like all about'. The sentence should be simplified to 'all of us learned how to sing' to correctly express past action.

× But you know, saying is a talent that you have to like. Have it available in your body, your voice, so that we can easily.

✓ But you know, singing is a talent that you have to have available in your body, your voice, so that you can do it easily.

The word 'saying' should be 'singing'. The phrase 'you have to like. Have it available' is incorrect; it should be 'you have to have it available'. Also, 'we can easily' is incomplete; it should specify what 'we can do easily'. The pronouns should be consistent and clear.

× I know it's early, but I want to sing in my wedding and I wanna sing for my father.

✓ I know it's early, but I want to sing at my wedding and I want to sing for my father.

The phrase 'in my wedding' should be 'at my wedding' to correctly indicate the event. Also, 'wanna' is informal; 'want to' is more appropriate in formal speech. The sentence correctly uses future intention but needs preposition correction.

× With the song named like my father is not about my father only is also about my mother and I wanna sing for my whole family forwarded me who love free first.

✓ With the song named 'My Father', it is not only about my father but also about my mother, and I want to sing for my whole family who have supported me and love me first.

The phrase 'named like my father' should be 'named "My Father"'. 'Forwarded me who love free first' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'who have supported me and love me first'. Prepositions and phrasing need correction for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes I do think so because you know the rhythm that beat the like the mood of the song can bring people like they will have a kid mode if they listen to it.

✓ Yes, I do think so because you know the rhythm that beats the mood of the song can bring people happiness; they will be in a good mood if they listen to it.

The phrase 'the rhythm that beat the like the mood' is incorrect; it should be 'the rhythm that beats the mood'. 'They will have a kid mode' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'they will be in a good mood'. Pronouns and verb forms need correction for clarity and agreement.

× That's why they play music everywhere on the typical restaurant or chain.

✓ That's why they play music everywhere in typical restaurants or chains.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; it should be 'in' when referring to places like restaurants. Also, 'the typical restaurant or chain' should be pluralized to 'typical restaurants or chains' to generalize the statement.