Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences simple and clear. Start with a direct answer, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax when I am free. I usually sing with my friends, and it makes us happy. Singing releases stress and brings us closer together. After singing, we usually go home feeling refreshed.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and repetitive. Give a clear and direct response first, then explain your feelings with specific reasons. Use linking words like 'because' and avoid repeating the same ideas.

Ejemplo: No, I have never learnt how to sing because I feel nervous and lack confidence in front of others. I prefer listening to songs rather than singing them myself. Listening to music helps me enjoy without feeling uncomfortable.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Answer directly who you want to sing for, then give reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid irrelevant information.

Ejemplo: I want to sing for my close friends because singing for them makes me happy. However, sometimes I do not feel like singing during certain events. Overall, I enjoy singing when I am with people I trust.

Sugerencia: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Give a clear opinion first, then explain how singing reduces stress and brings happiness using simple and correct sentences with linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. When we sing, it helps reduce stress and makes us feel more confident. Singing in a comfortable environment allows us to enjoy music and feel joyful.

× Yes, I like singing because when I was when I am free, so I can sit with friends and will we get there together.

✓ Yes, I like singing because when I am free, I can sit with friends and we get there together.

The sentence incorrectly mixes past tense 'was' with present tense 'am'. The correct tense to use here is present tense 'am' to match the context of being free currently. Also, 'will we get there together' is incorrect; it should be 'we get there together' to indicate a habitual action.

× After that we sing a song because it's it's released and attentions and also compatible his own for me and my friends together and after that then we went go how to home.

✓ After that, we sing a song because it releases attention and is enjoyable for me and my friends together, and after that, we go home.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'It's it's released and attentions' is unclear; it should be 'it releases attention' or 'it attracts attention'. 'Compatible his own' is incorrect and unclear; it is replaced with 'is enjoyable'. 'We went go how to home' is incorrect; it should be 'we go home'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No, absolutely I'm not singing because I'm sure and very nervous in front of other people because because I have no confidence in.

✓ No, absolutely I don't sing because I am shy and very nervous in front of other people because I have no confidence.

The phrase 'I'm not singing' is incorrect in this context; the simple present 'I don't sing' is appropriate to express habitual action. 'I'm sure' is incorrect here; likely intended to mean 'I am shy'. The sentence is corrected to use proper modal and verb forms to express inability or unwillingness due to nervousness.

× I don't like to sing any songs because I don't like.

✓ I don't like singing any songs because I don't enjoy it.

The phrase 'like to sing any songs' is awkward; 'like singing any songs' is more natural. Also, 'because I don't like' is incomplete; it should specify what is not liked, e.g., 'because I don't enjoy it'.

× But sometime I listen instead of singing. That's why I like listening and do not want to see.

✓ But sometimes I listen instead of singing. That's why I like listening and do not want to sing.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Do not want to see' is incorrect; it should be 'do not want to sing' to match the context of singing.

× Yes, I want to sing for some special first person, but unfortunately my friends are not close with each other.

✓ Yes, I want to sing for some special person, but unfortunately my friends are not close to each other.

'Some special first person' is unclear; 'some special person' is more appropriate. 'Not close with each other' should be 'not close to each other' as the correct preposition with 'close' is 'to'.

× So I sing a lot and I want to enjoy every moment of the singing life.

✓ So I sing a lot and I want to enjoy every moment of singing life.

'The singing life' is awkward; removing 'the' makes it more natural. 'Every moment of singing life' is a better expression.

× But in some of the activities will don't want to sing a song and absolutely in the absurd and.

✓ But in some activities, I don't want to sing a song, and absolutely not in absurd situations.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Will don't want' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't want'. 'Absolutely in the absurd and' is unclear; rephrased to 'absolutely not in absurd situations' for clarity.

× Why you feeling and singing can bring happiness to fearful?

✓ Why do you feel that singing can bring happiness to people?

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Why you feeling and singing can bring happiness to fearful?' is incorrect structure. Corrected to a proper question form with auxiliary verb 'do' and clearer wording.

× Yes absolutely when we are free and sit and singing a song then then the fearful stress re address are less and confidence and heads verifications environments and he was very happy and enjoy the music and also some technical issues.

✓ Yes, absolutely, when we are free and sit and sing a song, then the fearful stress is reduced, confidence increases, and we feel very happy and enjoy the music.

The original sentence has multiple tense and grammatical errors. 'Sit and singing' should be 'sit and sing'. 'Fearful stress re address are less' is incorrect; corrected to 'fearful stress is reduced'. 'Confidence and heads verifications environments' is unclear and removed for clarity. 'He was very happy' changed to 'we feel very happy' to match subject. 'Enjoy the music' is correct. The sentence is simplified and corrected for tense and clarity.