Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer shows enthusiasm but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and explain your reasons more clearly. Avoid redundancy and ensure your answer is natural and coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress after a long day at work.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to respond directly and clearly, using proper sentence structure. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily and provide specific details.

Ejemplo: I haven't taken formal singing lessons, but when I was a child, I watched videos on YouTube to learn how to sing better.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but fragmented and contains pauses. Try to speak more fluently and combine your ideas into complete sentences. Use linking words to connect your thoughts smoothly.

Ejemplo: I prefer to sing for myself because I am quite shy about my voice and worry about being judged by others.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use more natural expressions and link your ideas logically. Provide specific examples to support your opinion.

Ejemplo: Definitely, singing can bring happiness to people. For example, many singing competitions on TV attract large audiences and make people feel joyful.

× Of course I'm a big fan of singing so just because they singing can let my head out and also can. Broke my steam after a long working day.

✓ Of course I'm a big fan of singing because it can help me clear my head and also help me break my steam after a long working day.

The phrase 'they singing' is incorrect because 'singing' should be used as a gerund here, and 'they' is an incorrect pronoun reference. Also, 'broke my steam' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'break my steam' or better 'let off steam'. The sentence structure was fragmented and unclear, so it was corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I'm not really as fast. I remember when I was a kid I've short of video on YouTube about how to sing better so I just learned it from social media.

✓ I'm not really good at it. I remember when I was a kid I watched some videos on YouTube about how to sing better, so I just learned from social media.

The phrase 'I've short of video' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The past tense verb 'watched' is appropriate to describe past actions. 'Learned it from social media' is corrected to 'learned from social media' for natural phrasing. The sentence was restructured for clarity and correct tense usage.

× I think I just want to sing for myself. Because I'm really shy about my voice and also I. I'm afraid of the judgment from other one, so I just. Well, sing for myself.

✓ I think I just want to sing for myself because I'm really shy about my voice and also I'm afraid of judgment from others, so I just sing for myself.

The phrase 'judgment from other one' is incorrect; 'others' is the correct plural pronoun. The sentence fragments were combined for better flow and clarity. Also, 'I. I'm' was corrected to a single coherent sentence.

× Nowadays I just see that there are many the singing event on TV so that and also is attracting a lot of people and bring the happiness for them.

✓ Nowadays, I see that there are many singing events on TV, and they attract a lot of people and bring happiness to them.

The phrase 'many the singing event' is incorrect; 'many singing events' is correct plural form without 'the'. The verb agreement was corrected from 'is attracting' to 'they attract' to match the plural subject 'events'. Also, 'bring the happiness for them' was corrected to 'bring happiness to them' for natural phrasing.