Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is not very clear and has grammatical errors. Try to give a direct answer with clear reasons and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax when I am alone. For example, I often sing my favorite songs to relieve stress after a long day.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and lacks clear structure. Provide a direct response and explain your experience with learning singing using complete sentences and linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have tried to learn singing for a short time, about nine minutes. Although I love singing, I have not received formal training, so my singing quality depends on self-practice.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Try to express your ideas clearly with proper sentence structure and avoid repeating the same point.

Ejemplo: I want to sing for myself because singing helps me feel relaxed and stress-free, especially when I am alone.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and lacks specific supporting details. Provide clear reasons and examples to support your opinion using linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because music is an important part of human life. For instance, many famous singers attract audiences with their beautiful voices, which makes people feel joyful.

× Listening is the part of my life.

✓ Listening is a part of my life.

The sentence lacks an article before 'part'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. Here, 'a' is appropriate to indicate one part among many.

× When I. Sitting. Alone, I love to sing.

✓ When I am sitting alone, I love to sing.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks a verb. The correct form requires the verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense 'am sitting' and the sentence should be continuous.

× Ceiling fields lags and.

✓ Ceiling fields lag, and

The phrase is unclear and seems incomplete. Assuming 'fields' is plural, the verb should be 'lag' (plural form). Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs continuation or correction for clarity.

× Free from the stress.

✓ I feel free from stress.

The original is a fragment without a subject or verb. To be a complete sentence, it needs a subject and verb, e.g., 'I feel free from stress'.

× 9 minutes, tried to learn to sing.

✓ I tried to learn to sing for 9 minutes.

The sentence lacks a subject and proper structure. The verb 'tried' is past tense and should be accompanied by a subject and object to form a complete sentence.

× Yeah, yes, I love to sing a song.

✓ Yes, I love to sing songs.

The phrase 'sing a song' is less natural than 'sing songs' when expressing a general liking. Also, 'Yeah, yes' is redundant; 'Yes' suffices.

× Because it is my part of life.

✓ Because it is a part of my life.

Similar to previous, 'part' requires an article 'a' before it. Also, 'my part of life' is less natural than 'a part of my life'.

× But. The quality of this. Song is depends on the learning which is not thought.

✓ But the quality of this song depends on the learning which I have not been taught.

The original sentence is fragmented and has incorrect verb usage. 'Is depends' is incorrect; 'depends' alone suffices. Also, 'which is not thought' should be 'which I have not been taught' for clarity.

× I already mentioned that sing a song.

✓ I already mentioned that singing a song

The phrase 'that sing a song' is incorrect; it should be a gerund 'singing a song' to function as a noun phrase.

× Feels relaxed, stress free an when I'm alone.

✓ I feel relaxed and stress-free when I'm alone.

The sentence lacks a subject and has spelling errors ('an' should be 'and'). 'Feels' should be 'I feel' to match the subject.

× Feel better so I think for myself.

✓ I feel better, so I think for myself.

The sentence lacks a subject in the first clause. Adding 'I' clarifies the subject.

× Music is the part of the human life.

✓ Music is a part of human life.

'The part of the human life' is awkward; 'a part of human life' is more natural. Articles are adjusted accordingly.

× Many musicians and singers are famous.

✓ Many musicians and singers are famous.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× Because the. Attracts people by their voice.

✓ Because they attract people with their voice.

The original is fragmented and lacks a subject. 'The' is incorrect; 'they' refers to musicians and singers. 'Attracts' should be 'attract' to agree with plural subject. 'By' should be 'with' to indicate means.