Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, followed by supporting details using correct grammar and vocabulary. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are complete and logical.

Ejemplo: No, I don't like singing because I find it difficult to keep the rhythm. When I was young, I struggled to sing in tune, so I never enjoyed it much.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Provide a direct response with specific details, using linking words to connect ideas. Use appropriate vocabulary related to learning singing.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have tried to learn singing by watching lessons on singing apps. However, I didn't learn much because I didn't practice regularly.

Sugerencia: Your answer is fragmented and difficult to understand. Respond directly with a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons, using linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: I prefer to sing for myself because I am not confident enough to sing in front of others. It feels more comfortable and enjoyable that way.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Use complete sentences and linking words to express your opinion clearly and provide specific reasons.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness not only to the singer but also to the listeners. Singing allows people to express their emotions, which can be very uplifting.

× One I was young, I have I.

✓ When I was young, I had it.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'have' in present tense instead of past tense 'had' to describe a past situation. The phrase 'One I was young' is also incorrect; it should be 'When I was young' to indicate time. Use past tense verbs to describe past events.

× I was loved. By other people just full, not catch, catching the rhythm.

✓ I was loved by other people, but I couldn't catch the rhythm.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. 'I was loved.' and 'By other people just full' are incomplete. Also, 'not catch, catching the rhythm' is unclear. The corrected sentence combines these ideas into a complete, coherent sentence.

× I have. Watch some lessons about filling in as Cigna teaching apps.

✓ I have watched some lessons about singing on singing teaching apps.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'Watch' instead of the past participle 'watched' after 'have' to form the present perfect tense. Also, 'filling in as Cigna' seems to be a mishearing or typo; it should be 'singing'.

× But I don't. I didn't learn so much about thing.

✓ But I didn't learn much about it.

The sentence 'I don't.' is incomplete and unnecessary here. 'Didn't learn so much about thing' is incorrect; 'thing' should be 'it' and 'so much' is better replaced with 'much' for negative sentences.

× I want to think for myself.

✓ I want to sing for myself.

The original sentence uses 'think' instead of 'sing', which is likely a mistake given the context. The pronoun usage is correct, but the verb is wrong.

× I'm not really. I'm not confident in singing. For other people, so it's. Is nice and comfortable for its two thing for myself.

✓ I'm not really confident in singing for other people, so it's nice and comfortable to sing for myself.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack coherence. Combining them into a single, clear sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Not only bring happiness to the singer, but two other people who listen to singers singing because.

✓ Not only does singing bring happiness to the singer, but also to other people who listen to singers sing because...

The sentence lacks the auxiliary verb 'does' for the third person singular and misuses 'two' instead of 'to'. Also, 'singers singing' is awkward; 'singers sing' is better.

× Singer is self can bring out your bad emotions once in.

✓ Singing itself can bring out your bad emotions once in a while.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Singer is self' should be 'Singing itself'. The phrase 'once in' is incomplete; 'once in a while' is a common expression.