Singing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is enthusiastic and provides a personal example, which is good. However, there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect the naturalness and clarity. Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing. Although I'm not a professional singer, I love singing along with my friends. For instance, during my master's studies, we often gathered in a hall to pick our favorite songs, open the lyrics, and sing together loudly. Those moments were some of our favorite times.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows your desire to learn singing, but the response is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences. Try to organize your thoughts clearly, use complete sentences, and avoid filler words. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: I have always wanted to learn how to sing since I was a child, but I never had the opportunity. However, I believe it's never too late to start learning something new. I would love to take singing lessons in the future to improve my skills.

Sugerencia: Your answer is honest and relevant, but it lacks a clear topic sentence and could be more structured. Try to start with a direct answer, then add supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid filler sounds like 'uhm'.

Ejemplo: I'm not sure if I will ever sing professionally for an audience. However, I enjoy singing for my friends when we get together because it makes the gathering more enjoyable and fun.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and provides interesting supporting details, which is good. However, some phrases are repetitive, and the scientific claim could be expressed more cautiously. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. It is a great way to relieve stress and stimulate the release of happy hormones. In fact, I read a recent study suggesting that the vibrations from singing might even influence our DNA, which I found fascinating.

× Although I'm not a good singer up, I love singing along with my friends.

✓ Although I'm not a good singer, I love singing along with my friends.

The phrase 'singer up' is incorrect; 'up' is misplaced and unnecessary here. The correct phrase is 'a good singer'. Removing 'up' corrects the adjective order and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× For example, when I was doing my masters, all of her friends, we used to gather an hall and we used to start picking our favorite songs, open the lyrics and start singing out loud.

✓ For example, when I was doing my masters, all of our friends, we used to gather in a hall and we used to start picking our favorite songs, open the lyrics and start singing out loud.

The pronoun 'her' is incorrect because the speaker is referring to their own friends, so 'our' is appropriate. Also, the preposition 'an hall' is incorrect; it should be 'in a hall' because 'hall' is a countable noun and requires the article 'a' and the preposition 'in' to indicate location.

× all of her friends, we used to gather an hall

✓ all of our friends, we used to gather in a hall

The preposition 'an' before 'hall' is incorrect; it should be 'in a hall' to indicate the place where the gathering happens. Also, 'an' is an article, not a preposition, and 'hall' starts with a consonant sound, so 'a' is the correct article.

× I think it's never too late up man, and there's no good time to Start learning something.

✓ I think it's never too late, man, and there's no better time to start learning something.

The phrase 'too late up man' is incorrect; 'up' is misplaced and unnecessary. Also, 'no good time' is better expressed as 'no better time' to convey the intended meaning. The word 'Start' should be lowercase 'start' as it is mid-sentence.

× Knew I would love a. Doing some training on singing and be a better singer.

✓ I knew I would love doing some training in singing and becoming a better singer.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. 'Knew I would love a.' is incomplete. The corrected sentence combines the ideas into a complete sentence with proper verb forms and prepositions.

× Doing some training on singing and be a better singer.

✓ Doing some training in singing and becoming a better singer.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; 'training in singing' is the correct phrase. Also, parallel verb forms are needed: 'doing' and 'becoming'.

× I'm unsure if I'll be able to be in a position that I'll be singing for people, but uhm, I like doing fun activities like singing along with my friends when we are all together, so it's a fun activity when we gather.

✓ I'm unsure if I'll be in a position where I'll be singing for people, but uhm, I like doing fun activities like singing along with my friends when we are all together, so it's a fun activity when we gather.

The phrase 'able to be in a position that I'll be singing' is awkward. 'In a position where I'll be singing' is more natural. Also, 'able to be' is redundant here and can be omitted for clarity.

× I feel singing is a great activity to release stress and release happy hormones.

✓ I feel singing is a great activity to relieve stress and release happy hormones.

The verb 'release' is not appropriate with 'stress'; the correct verb is 'relieve stress'. 'Release' is correct with 'happy hormones'.