Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural, use correct grammar (plural/singular), avoid repeating 'moreover', and keep answer concise (max 5 sentences). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details with linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers. I have a large variety planted in my backyard because my husband is a professional florist, so he taught me how to care for them. For example, we grow roses, marigolds and jasmine, which brighten the garden and smell wonderful when they bloom.

Sugerencia: Use correct verb forms and article/noun agreement, reduce filler words (uh), and organize into a topic sentence plus specific supporting detail. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'because' to clarify reasons.

Ejemplo: Yes, many people I know enjoy flowers, especially my husband. He studied floristry at university, so because of his training we always have many different species at home; for example, he grows orchids and chrysanthemums that he arranges for friends and family.

Sugerencia: Be concise and grammatical: use 'semi-rural' and fix sentence structures. Avoid excessive hesitations. Provide one clear reason and one specific example of the flowers or places where you see them.

Ejemplo: Yes, I live in a semi-rural area, which has a lot of green space and many flowering plants. For instance, the roadside hedges are full of bougainvillea and wild daisies, and I enjoy seeing them when I go for walks.

Sugerencia: Make sentences clearer and avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases (e.g. 'in form of emails', 'at that price'). Give a concise reason and one example habit. Use linking words like 'so' or 'instead' to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Not usually; I rarely take photos of plants because I prefer to enjoy them in the moment. For example, when I walk in the garden I look at the colors and scents instead of taking pictures, so the memory feels more vivid to me.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and clearly, avoid unclear references and grammar errors. Replace vague anecdotes with a specific example or statistic and use linking words to show cause or result. Keep within 1–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, sending flowers is very common and has become more popular recently. For example, many people order garlands and bouquets online for weddings and festivals, and I even saw a new machine on social media that automates garland-making, which shows growing demand.

× Definitely I am fond of flower.

✓ Definitely I am fond of flowers.

The noun 'flower' is countable and here it is used in a general sense; English requires the plural form 'flowers' (or 'the flower' with a specific reference). Use plural to talk about flowers in general. Suggestion: Use 'flowers' when speaking generally about that kind of thing.

× Moreover, I have a huge collection of biodiversity especially in flowers.

✓ Moreover, I have a huge collection of biodiversity, especially of flowers.

The phrase 'collection of biodiversity especially in flowers' is awkward; 'biodiversity' is an uncountable abstract noun and 'especially of flowers' makes the intended meaning clearer. Add a comma before the 'especially' phrase. Suggestion: Use 'especially of X' or 'especially in X' with clear reference; prefer 'especially of flowers' here.

× Moreover, I have planted lots of variety in my backyard.

✓ Moreover, I have planted lots of varieties in my backyard.

'Variety' can be uncountable but when referring to multiple kinds you should use the plural 'varieties' or 'a lot of variety'. 'Lots of' must be followed by a plural noun: 'lots of varieties.' Suggestion: Use 'lots of varieties' or 'a wide variety'.

× I got all the information regarding this from my husband who is florist.

✓ I got all the information regarding this from my husband, who is a florist.

Before the noun 'florist' the indefinite article 'a' is required. Also a nonrestrictive clause needs commas around 'who is a florist.' Suggestion: Use 'a florist' and add commas for the parenthetical clause.

× So we both are working on different variety.

✓ So we both are working on different varieties.

'Variety' should be plural when referring to different kinds. Use 'varieties' to indicate multiple types. Suggestion: Use plural when referring to more than one type.

× Definitely, I know many people who loves to plant flower in their home and as well as presented the flower to everybody here.

✓ Definitely, I know many people who love to plant flowers in their homes and also present flowers to everyone.

The relative clause subject 'people' is plural, so the verb must be 'love' not 'loves.' 'Plant flower' needs plural 'flowers.' 'Home' as a location for many people takes plural 'homes.' 'Presented' should be present tense 'present' to match 'know' and the habitual sense; 'everybody here' is better 'everyone.' Suggestion: Ensure verb agrees with the plural subject and keep tense consistent; use plural nouns for general statements.

× I would like to talk about my husband who is a florist.

✓ I would like to talk about my husband, who is a florist.

This is a nonrestrictive clause describing the husband; it should be set off with commas. The original lacks a comma. Suggestion: Add commas around nonessential relative clauses.

× He, uh, got graduation degree in this specific stream and that's why we always have huge variety of flowers in our house.

✓ He got a degree in this field, and that's why we always have a huge variety of flowers in our house.

Use 'got a degree' rather than 'got graduation degree.' 'Specific stream' is unnatural; 'field' is better. Also add the article 'a' before 'huge variety.' The past tense 'got' is fine for completing education; the following clause keeps present tense 'have' for current possession. Suggestion: Use natural collocations like 'got a degree' and 'a huge variety.'

× Fortunately, I live in semi rural area.

✓ Fortunately, I live in a semi-rural area.

Compound adjectives like 'semi-rural' need a hyphen and the noun 'area' requires an article 'a.' Suggestion: Use 'a semi-rural area'.

× We moved from bustling city, uh, to this particular reason just because of it has lot of green space and, uh, moreover, flowers, uh, are also available in vibrant color and in huge variety.

✓ We moved from a bustling city to this particular region because it has a lot of green space, and moreover, flowers are available in vibrant colors and in a huge variety.

Multiple issues: 'bustling city' needs an article; 'reason' is wrong word for location—use 'region'; 'because of it has' is ungrammatical—use 'because it has' or 'because of its'; 'lot' needs 'a lot of'; 'vibrant color' should be plural 'vibrant colors'; 'huge variety' needs an article 'a' or plural 'huge variety of' if rephrased. Suggestion: Use correct articles, choose appropriate nouns (region), and fix clause connectors ('because it has').

× Uh, I love to adore them, uh, when I go for walking and.

✓ I love to admire them when I go for walks.

'Love to adore' is redundant; 'admire' or 'adore' suffices. 'Go for walking' is unidiomatic—use 'go for walks.' The sentence ended with 'and' leaving it incomplete. Suggestion: Use a single appropriate verb and complete the sentence: 'I love to admire them when I go for walks.'

× Not really, I'm having a very happy schedule.

✓ Not really; I have a very busy schedule.

'I'm having a very happy schedule' is unidiomatic; 'have a busy schedule' is the correct expression. 'Not really' should be separated; use present simple 'have' for states. Suggestion: Use established collocations: 'have a busy schedule.'

× I hardly take photos of any kind of plant.

✓ I hardly take photos of any kind of plant.

This sentence is acceptable but slightly unnatural. More natural: 'I hardly ever take photos of any kind of plant' or 'I rarely take photos of plants.' Suggestion: Use 'hardly ever' or 'rarely' and plural 'plants' for natural phrasing.

× Moreover, I just catch them with my eyes and keep them in my memory.

✓ Moreover, I just take them in with my eyes and keep them in my memory.

'Catch them with my eyes' is not the typical collocation. 'Take them in with my eyes' or simply 'just look at them and keep them in my memory' sounds natural. Suggestion: Use idiomatic expressions like 'take them in with my eyes' or 'admire them and keep them in my memory.'

× Because whenever I spend time in nature, I really don't want to keep it stored in form of emails.

✓ Because whenever I spend time in nature, I really don't want to keep it stored in the form of photos or messages.

'In form of emails' is illogical for storing memories of nature; if the student meant digital photos or messages use those terms. Also add 'the' before 'form.' Suggestion: Use appropriate storage nouns and include the article: 'in the form of photos'.

× I just adore them. Uh, at that price?

✓ I just adore them. Uh, at that point?

'At that price?' is out of place and likely a misphrased filler. If the student meant 'at that point' as a hesitation, use that. If it was 'any place' or something else, clarify. As-is it's incoherent. Suggestion: Replace unclear filler with appropriate hesitation phrases like 'at that point?' or remove it.

× Definitely and my country has witnessed a surge in this particular trend.

✓ Definitely, my country has witnessed a surge in this trend.

Starting a sentence with 'Definitely and' is incorrect. Use 'Definitely,' and remove 'particular' unless needed. The conjunction 'and' is unnecessary. Suggestion: Use 'Definitely, my country has witnessed...' without 'and.'

× Moreover, I yes was yesterday's calling a Facebook story and saw a invented machine in my country which was making Garland out of flowers.

✓ Moreover, yesterday I was looking at a Facebook story and saw a machine in my country that was making garlands out of flowers.

Problems: word order 'I yes was yesterday's calling' is ungrammatical; 'looking at a Facebook story' or 'reading a Facebook story' is better; 'saw a invented' requires 'an invented' or better 'saw a machine' and 'garlands' plural and not capitalized. Use 'that' for the defining relative clause. Suggestion: Use correct subject-verb order, article 'a' or 'an' where needed, and plural/lowercase for common nouns.

× So definitely flowers are getting popular in my country and giving.

✓ So definitely flowers are becoming popular in my country and are being given as gifts.

'Getting popular' is acceptable but 'becoming popular' is more standard. The verb 'giving' is incomplete and needs a subject/structure: 'are being given' or 'people give them.' Suggestion: Use complete passive or active constructions: 'are being given as gifts' or 'people give them as gifts.'