Flowers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản, thì và trật tự từ; rút gọn câu để tự nhiên hơn; sử dụng liên từ phù hợp. Cụ thể: dùng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen (I always take photos), sửa lỗi động từ (seen → see, have take → take), bỏ từ thừa (because you know). Thêm một câu ngắn giải thích vì sao bạn chụp để câu rõ ràng hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love flowers because they symbolize beauty and appreciation. I often take photos of them when I see attractive blooms because they make great pictures.

Sugerencia: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (don't know anyone who love → who loves), tránh từ thừa và lẩm bẩm (like, uh). Nên trả lời trực tiếp rồi bổ sung bằng ví dụ ngắn. Dùng liên từ để mạch lạc (for example, because).

Ejemplo: No, I don't really know anyone who loves flowers. For example, my mother rarely buys them because she told me she isn't very keen on flowers.

Sugerencia: Tránh câu dài lủng củng và lặp từ (because repeated). Dùng cấu trúc đơn giản, đúng ngữ pháp và cụ thể về địa điểm: nói rõ Công viên/Trường học có hay không. Sửa vocab (heart of the city, covered by trees then flower → crowded with buildings, few flowers).

Ejemplo: No, there aren't many flowers where I live. I live in the city centre where buildings are dense, so parks and schools nearby have very few flowers.

Sugerencia: Sửa ngữ pháp (I'm not usually take → I don't usually take; flower is → flowers are; he → they) và rút gọn ý. Tránh lặp từ ('I know, I know'). Nên nêu rõ tần suất và lý do một cách ngắn gọn.

Ejemplo: Not really. I don't usually take photos of flowers because I'm not particularly interested in them, even though I appreciate their beauty and scent.

Sugerencia: Sửa ngữ pháp và trật tự từ (especially on special occasions such as birthdays or to thank teachers). Tránh nói lẫn lộn; dùng ví dụ cụ thể và động từ đúng (to show appreciation, to thank).

Ejemplo: Not very often. People usually give flowers on special occasions, such as birthdays, or students may give flowers to teachers to show appreciation for their efforts.

× Absolutely yes, because you know that flowers symbolize for beauty and appreciation.

✓ Absolutely yes, because you know that flowers symbolize beauty and appreciation.

'Symbolize' is a transitive verb that takes a direct object without the preposition 'for'. Use 'symbolize beauty and appreciation' to be grammatically correct. Suggestions: Remove unnecessary prepositions after 'symbolize'.

× So whenever I seen any flowers, I will, uh, use my phone to have take it a picture because it's have the very suitable scenes and beautiful.

✓ So whenever I see any flowers, I will, uh, use my phone to take a picture because they are in very suitable and beautiful scenes.

'Seen' is the past participle; the sentence requires the simple present 'see' for habitual action. 'Will' + present is acceptable for future intention, 'to have take it a picture' is ungrammatical; use 'to take a picture'. 'It's have' is wrong; use 'they are' to refer to 'flowers'. Suggestions: Use simple present for habitual actions (I see), use 'take a picture', and ensure pronoun agreement (they/them for plural).

× Maybe no, because I don't know anyone who love flowers, including my family, such as my mom.

✓ Maybe not, because I don't know anyone who loves flowers, including my family members, such as my mom.

Use 'not' rather than 'no' in this context. 'Who' clause requires third person singular 'loves' to agree with 'anyone'. 'My family' is collective; 'family members' or 'my family' both OK but 'members' clarifies. Suggestions: Use 'not' for negative answers, ensure subject-verb agreement with 'anyone'.

× Like I'm rarely see her buy any flowers because I used to ask my mom that, uh, do you love flowers?

✓ I rarely see her buy any flowers because I used to ask my mom, 'Do you love flowers?'

'I'm rarely see' is incorrect; use 'I rarely see' for habitual present. 'Used to ask' implies past habitual; if you mean in the past, keep 'used to ask' but punctuation and word order should be corrected. Suggestions: Use 'I rarely see' for present habits and place direct questions in quotes or reported speech correctly.

× She told me that she's not really keen on flowers, so yeah.

✓ She told me that she is not really keen on flowers, so yeah.

Contraction 'she's' can be ambiguous (she is/she has) but here it's acceptable; no major grammar error. Correction keeps full form for clarity. Suggestions: Use the full form 'she is' in formal speech to avoid ambiguity.

× No, because I live in the heart of the city so it's ready to see a lot of flowers because it's always covered by trees then flower and I just can't see the flowers in the park.

✓ No, because I live in the heart of the city so it's rare to see a lot of flowers; the area is covered by trees rather than flowers, so I just can't see many flowers in the park.

'Ready to see' is incorrect; use 'rare to see'. 'Then' should be 'than' in comparisons. Sentence structure is awkward; 'many flowers' fits plural noun. Suggestions: Use 'rare' for scarcity, 'rather than' for contrast, and 'many' with countable plural nouns.

× Uh, in the school it's so rare to see flowers.

✓ In the school, it's very rare to see flowers.

'So rare' is informal but acceptable; changing to 'very rare' is more natural. Ensure comma placement. Suggestions: Use 'very rare' for clarity in formal contexts.

× Maybe no because I'm not usually take photos whenever I see any flowers because I'm not really into flowers.

✓ Maybe not, because I don't usually take photos whenever I see flowers, as I'm not really into them.

'I'm not usually take' is ungrammatical; use 'I don't usually take'. 'Any flowers' is unnecessary in this context; 'flowers' suffices. Pronoun 'them' refers to 'flowers'. Suggestions: Use auxiliary 'do' for negatives in simple present and correct pronoun references.

× I know, I know that flower is so beautiful and he has the comfortable smell but it's not enough attracted me to take photos.

✓ I know flowers are very beautiful and they have a pleasant smell, but that doesn't attract me enough to take photos.

'Flower is' should be plural 'flowers are' when speaking generally. Using 'he' for flowers is incorrect; use 'they'. 'Comfortable smell' is unnatural; use 'pleasant smell'. 'Not enough attracted me' is ungrammatical; use 'doesn't attract me enough'. Suggestions: Use plural forms for general statements, correct pronouns for inanimate objects (they), and proper adjective choices ('pleasant').

× No, they just sometimes send flowers to others, especially in the special occasions such as their birthday or the teacher.

✓ No, they only sometimes send flowers to others, especially on special occasions such as birthdays or for teachers.

'Just sometimes' is awkward; 'only sometimes' is better. Use 'on special occasions' not 'in'. 'Such as their birthday or the teacher' is unclear; use 'birthdays or for teachers'. Suggestions: Use correct preposition 'on' with 'occasions' and clarify who the occasion is for.

× That is, students often send flowers to the teacher to be really appreciate their effort to teaching them or something like that.

✓ That is, students often send flowers to teachers to really appreciate their efforts in teaching them.

'The teacher' implies a specific teacher; 'teachers' fits general statements. 'To be really appreciate' is wrong; use 'to really appreciate' (verb) or 'to show appreciation for' (noun). 'Effort to teaching' should be 'efforts in teaching'. Suggestions: Use plural nouns for generalization and correct verb forms and prepositions ('appreciate' as verb or 'show appreciation for').