Band 7 Example
Question: Do people spend too much time looking at digital screens? Why?
Idea 1
Yes, people do
Model Answer
Yes, people definitely spend too much time on screens. It's bad because we don't move much when we're sitting in front of a computer or phone all day. This can make us less healthy. Also, looking at screens a lot can make it hard to sleep. The light from the screen keeps our brain awake. We should try to cut down the time we spend on screens for our health.
Idea 2
No, it's necessary
Model Answer
No, I don't think we spend too much time on screens. We need them for work and school. Nowadays, everything is online. We do our homework, attend classes, and even our jobs require us to use computers or tablets. It's not just for fun; it's how we get things done. So, the time we spend on screens is necessary for us to keep up with everything.