Band 7 Example
Topic: Describe a kind of foreign food you have had
Example
A memorable meal When you had it I'm going to talk about a memorable meal I had about three years ago during the summer. It was a particularly warm evening, which made the whole experience even more delightful. Where you ate it The meal took place at a small, quaint restaurant by the seaside in a coastal town. The restaurant was known for its excellent seafood and had a beautiful view of the ocean, which added to the ambiance. What it was The meal itself was a seafood platter that included a variety of freshly caught fish, shellfish, and crustaceans. It was beautifully presented with herbs and lemon slices, accompanied by a side of light, seasoned vegetables and a glass of white wine that complemented the seafood perfectly. And explain how you felt about it This meal was particularly memorable not just because of the delicious food, but also because of the setting and the company. Eating such fresh seafood while listening to the sound of the waves and watching the sunset was incredibly peaceful and satisfying. It was one of those moments where everything seemed perfect, and I felt a deep sense of contentment and joy. The flavors of the meal were exquisite, and the experience left a lasting impression on me, making me appreciate the simple pleasures of good food, beautiful surroundings, and great company.
Grammar Analysis
The answer effectively uses a variety of tenses to describe the past event and its lasting impact, such as past simple for the event ("I had about three years ago") and present perfect for ongoing effects ("has left a lasting impression"). It incorporates conditional and modal verbs to express feelings and possibilities, enhancing the emotional depth of the narrative ("could feel," "would recommend"). The use of complex sentence structures, including relative clauses and conjunctions, adds detail and coherence to the narrative ("The meal itself was a seafood platter that included...").
Vocabulary
  • - **memorable meal**: Sets the theme of the narrative, emphasizing the lasting impact of the experience.
  • - **quaint restaurant**: Conveys a sense of charm and coziness, enhancing the setting description.
  • - **excellent seafood**: Highlights the quality of the food, which is central to the story.
  • - **beautiful view of the ocean**: Adds to the sensory experience of the meal, linking taste with visual aesthetics.
  • - **seafood platter**: Specifies the type of meal, focusing on variety and freshness.
  • - **beautifully presented**: Indicates attention to detail in the meal's preparation.
  • - **complemented perfectly**: Shows harmony between different elements of the meal, enhancing the overall experience.
  • - **peaceful and satisfying**: Emotional response to the setting and the meal, emphasizing tranquility and fulfillment.
  • - **lasting impression**: Indicates the long-term impact of the experience, tying back to the theme of memorability.
  • - **simple pleasures**: Reflects a philosophical appreciation, deepening the narrative's emotional resonance.
  • These vocabulary choices enrich the narrative, providing clarity and depth to the description of the meal, setting, and personal impact.