Band 7 Example
Topic: Describe a shopping mall
Example
Step 1: Identify the Part 2 question requirements The question asks you to describe a shopping mall. You need to mention: - The name of the mall - Its location - How often you visit it - What you usually buy there You should also expand your answer, provide details, and explain your feelings or opinions about the mall. Step 2: Strategies for a better answer - Expand your answer with personal stories or examples, such as a memorable shopping experience. - Ensure coherence by logically connecting each point and referring back to previous details. - Paraphrase the question and use varied vocabulary related to shopping, locations, and experiences. - Use signposting language to guide the listener through your answer. - Demonstrate a range of grammar, including complex sentences and different tenses. - Use synonyms for words like “mall” (shopping center, complex), “buy” (purchase, pick up), etc. - Make sure the answer is over 300 words and flows naturally. Topic:A Modern Shopping Mall in My City What its name is The shopping mall I’d like to talk about is called “Sunshine Plaza.” It’s one of the largest and most popular shopping centers in my city, and it has become a landmark for both locals and tourists. The mall opened about ten years ago and has grown in popularity ever since, mainly because of its modern design and the wide variety of stores it offers. Where it is Sunshine Plaza is located right in the heart of the city, just a few minutes’ walk from the central train station. Its location is extremely convenient, which is one of the reasons why it attracts so many visitors every day. The mall is surrounded by office buildings and residential areas, making it easily accessible for people who live or work nearby. I remember the first time I visited, I was amazed by how spacious and bright the mall was, with its glass ceilings and open layout. How often you visit it As for how often I go there, I would say I visit Sunshine Plaza about once or twice a month. I’m not someone who enjoys shopping all the time, but I do find myself going there whenever I need to buy something specific or when I want to hang out with friends. Sometimes, I just go there to relax, especially during the hot summer months, because the mall is air-conditioned and has plenty of comfortable seating areas. On weekends, it can get quite crowded, but I actually enjoy the lively atmosphere. And what you usually buy at the mall When it comes to what I usually buy at Sunshine Plaza, it really depends on my needs at the time. Most often, I go there to purchase clothes or shoes, as there are many well-known fashion brands and local boutiques. I also like to browse the electronics stores, especially when I’m thinking about upgrading my phone or buying accessories. Besides shopping, I often grab a coffee or a meal at one of the many restaurants or cafes in the mall. There’s a great food court with a variety of cuisines, so it’s a perfect place to meet up with friends and try something new. Overall, I think Sunshine Plaza is more than just a place to shop; it’s a social hub where people can spend time together, enjoy entertainment, and even attend events or exhibitions. The combination of convenience, variety, and atmosphere is what makes this shopping mall stand out for me, and that’s why I keep going back.
Grammar Analysis
The answer demonstrates a strong command of both simple and complex sentence structures, which helps to provide detailed and engaging descriptions. For example, "The mall opened about ten years ago and has grown in popularity ever since, mainly because of its modern design and the wide variety of stores it offers." This sentence uses a complex structure with multiple clauses. There is effective use of present perfect and present simple tenses to describe ongoing situations and habits, such as "I have visited" and "I usually buy." The answer also uses relative clauses ("which is one of the reasons why it attracts so many visitors") and conditional sentences ("Whenever I need to buy something specific or when I want to hang out with friends"). Signposting language like "As for how often I go there" and "When it comes to what I usually buy" helps organize the answer logically and naturally.
Vocabulary
  • shopping center
  • landmark
  • modern design
  • variety of stores
  • convenient location
  • spacious and bright
  • air-conditioned
  • lively atmosphere
  • fashion brands
  • food court
  • social hub
  • stand out