Band 7 Example

Question: Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?

Idea 1

On Paper
Model Answer
I prefer reading on paper because it feels better for my eyes. I also like holding a real book in my hands, and I think I can focus more without my phone distracting me.
Personally, I much prefer reading on paper. I find it far more comfortable for my eyes, and I really enjoy the tactile experience of holding a physical book or magazine. Plus, I can concentrate better without the distractions that come with digital devices.
Grammar Analysis
1. Comparative structures: The answer uses comparatives like "far more comfortable" and "concentrate better" to clearly express preference and comparison. 2. Present simple tense: The response consistently uses the present simple tense ("prefer," "find," "enjoy," "can concentrate") to describe general habits and opinions, which is appropriate for this type of question.
Vocabulary
  • much prefer
  • far more comfortable
  • tactile experience
  • concentrate better
  • distractions
  • digital devices

Idea 2

On a Screen
Model Answer
I like reading on a screen because it’s more convenient. I can carry lots of books on my phone, and it’s easy to find information quickly. Also, I can make the text bigger if I want.
I prefer reading on a screen, mainly because of the convenience it offers. I can store hundreds of books on my phone or tablet, and it’s really easy to search for information or adjust the font size for comfort. I also appreciate that e-books are often cheaper and instantly available.
Grammar Analysis
1. Use of modal verbs and infinitives: "I can store hundreds of books," "it’s really easy to search for information or adjust the font size"—these show the ability to use modal verbs ("can") and infinitive structures ("to search," "to adjust") to express ability and purpose. 2. Use of conjunctions: The answer uses "and" and "or" to connect multiple ideas smoothly, which helps to organize the response clearly and logically. 3. Use of comparative and descriptive adjectives: "cheaper," "instantly available," and "really easy" demonstrate the use of comparative and descriptive adjectives to add detail and comparison.
Vocabulary
  • convenience
  • store hundreds of books
  • search for information
  • adjust the font size
  • cheaper
  • instantly available

Idea 3

It Depends
Model Answer
It depends for me. If I’m studying, I like to use paper because it helps me focus. But when I travel or just want to read something quickly, I use my phone.
Actually, it depends on the situation. If I’m studying or planning to read for a long time, I definitely prefer paper because it helps me concentrate. However, for quick reading or when I’m on the go, I find my phone or tablet much more convenient. Sometimes I even switch between both, depending on my mood and what I’m reading.
Grammar Analysis
1. Conditional Sentences: The answer uses first conditional structures ("If I’m studying or planning to read for a long time, I definitely prefer paper") to explain preferences in different situations, showing flexibility in grammar use. 2. Contrast Connectors: The use of "However" introduces a contrasting idea, which helps organize the answer logically and clearly. 3. Present Continuous and Simple Present: The answer uses both ("I’m studying", "I find", "I even switch") appropriately to describe habits and ongoing situations.
Vocabulary
  • it depends on the situation
  • definitely prefer
  • concentrate
  • quick reading
  • on the go
  • convenient
  • switch between both