Band 7 Example
Topic: Describe an interesting traditional story
Example
The Legend of the White Snake What the story is about I'm going to talk about a traditional Chinese legend known as "The Legend of the White Snake." This story is about a white snake spirit named Bai Suzhen who transforms into a beautiful woman and falls in love with a human named Xu Xian. Their love faces numerous challenges, particularly from a monk named Fahai who believes that humans and spirits should not intermingle. The story is a classic tale of love, betrayal, and redemption. When/how you knew it I first came across this story when I was a child. It was during the Chinese New Year when my family would gather around to celebrate and share stories. This particular story was often dramatized in operas and television series, so it was quite popular and well-known. Who told you the story The first time I heard the story was from my grandmother. She was an excellent storyteller and had a way of bringing the characters to life. She would often tell us traditional stories to teach us about our culture and heritage, and "The Legend of the White Snake" was one of her favorites. And explain how you felt when you first heard it When I first heard the story, I was completely captivated. The idea of a snake transforming into a human was fascinating to me as a child. I was drawn to the themes of love and sacrifice, and I remember feeling a mix of emotions—sadness for the challenges the couple faced, and hope that love would conquer all. The story left a lasting impression on me, and even now, I find myself reflecting on its themes and the lessons it imparts about love, acceptance, and the complexities of human and supernatural relationships. It’s a tale that beautifully blends fantasy with moral lessons, making it timeless and universally appealing.
Grammar Analysis
The answer uses a variety of sentence structures, including complex sentences, to provide a detailed and engaging narrative. For example, "This story is about a white snake spirit named Bai Suzhen who transforms into a beautiful woman and falls in love with a human named Xu Xian." This sentence effectively uses relative clauses to add depth to the description. The use of past tense is consistent and appropriate for recounting a story and personal experiences, as seen in "I first came across this story when I was a child." The answer also employs conditional sentences to express hypothetical situations, such as "I remember feeling a mix of emotions—sadness for the challenges the couple faced, and hope that love would conquer all."
Vocabulary
  • traditional Chinese legend
  • white snake spirit
  • transform
  • numerous challenges
  • betrayal and redemption
  • dramatized
  • operas and television series
  • captivated
  • themes of love and sacrifice
  • lasting impression
  • reflecting on its themes
  • moral lessons
  • timeless and universally appealing