Band 7 Example

Question: Do you often tell your friends when they do something well?

Idea 1

Yes
Model Answer
Yes, I often tell my friends when they do something well. I think it's important to encourage them and make them feel good about their achievements. It helps our friendship grow stronger.
Yes, I make it a point to tell my friends when they do something well. I believe in encouraging them and boosting their confidence. Compliments not only strengthen our friendship but also provide positive reinforcement, helping them continue to excel. I genuinely enjoy seeing my friends happy and motivated.
Grammar Analysis
1.Usage of infinitive phrase: "to tell my friends when they do something well" uses an infinitive phrase to express purpose or intention. 2.Correlative conjunction: "not only... but also" is used to connect two related ideas, emphasizing the dual benefits of giving compliments.
Vocabulary
  • make it a point
  • encouraging
  • boosting their confidence
  • compliments
  • strengthen our friendship
  • positive reinforcement
  • excel

Idea 2

No
Model Answer
No, I don't always tell my friends when they do something well. Sometimes I forget, or I think they already know. I try to show my support in other ways, like celebrating with them.
No, I don't often tell my friends when they do something well. I sometimes forget to express my appreciation verbally, or I assume they already know. I might feel shy or awkward giving compliments, so I prefer to show my support in other ways, like helping them celebrate. I believe actions speak louder than words, so I try to be there for them instead.
Grammar Analysis
1.Use of adverbs: The use of "often" and "verbally" effectively modifies the verbs, providing clarity on frequency and manner. 2.Use of conjunctions: The use of "or" and "so" connects ideas smoothly, showing the relationship between reasons and actions.
Vocabulary
  • verbally
  • shy or awkward
  • actions speak louder than words