Band 7 Example

Question: Do you make a list when you shop?

Idea 1

Yes
Model Answer
Yes, I make a list when I shop. It helps me remember what I need to buy and keeps me from spending too much money. I usually write it down on paper before I go.
Yes, I always make a list when I shop to ensure I don't forget anything important. It helps me stay within my budget and avoid impulse buying. I usually categorize items by sections of the store for efficiency, and I use a shopping app to keep track of my list.
Grammar Analysis
1.Infinitive of purpose: "to ensure I don't forget anything important" uses an infinitive to explain the purpose of making a list, which adds clarity to the response. 2.Parallel structure: "stay within my budget and avoid impulse buying" uses parallel structure to list the benefits of making a shopping list, enhancing the fluency and coherence of the sentence.
Vocabulary
  • stay within my budget
  • impulse buying
  • categorize items by sections of the store
  • shopping app

Idea 2

No
Model Answer
No, I don't make a list. I like to shop freely and see what I find interesting. I usually remember what I need, and I like to look for discounts.
No, I prefer to shop spontaneously and see what catches my eye. I have a good memory and usually remember what I need. Making a list feels too restrictive for me, and I enjoy browsing and discovering new products. I often rely on store promotions and discounts to guide my purchases.
Grammar Analysis
1.Usage of adverbs: The use of "spontaneously" effectively describes the manner in which the speaker shops, showcasing the ability to use adverbs to convey actions. 2.Usage of infinitive phrases: "to guide my purchases" is an example of an infinitive phrase used to explain the purpose of relying on promotions and discounts.
Vocabulary
  • spontaneously
  • catches my eye
  • restrictive
  • browsing
  • promotions and discounts