Band 7 Example

Question: How do you feel when you are praised?

Idea 1

Happy and Motivated
Model Answer
When I'm praised, I feel happy because it means people notice my hard work. It makes me want to keep doing better and work harder.
When I receive praise, I feel genuinely happy because it shows that my efforts are recognized. It boosts my confidence and motivates me to work harder and achieve more.
Grammar Analysis
1.Use of present simple tense: The response uses the present simple tense ("I feel", "it shows", "boosts", "motivates") to describe general truths or habitual reactions, which is appropriate for expressing feelings and reactions. 2.Cause and effect structure: The use of "because" effectively explains the reason behind the feeling of happiness, showing a clear cause-and-effect relationship.
Vocabulary
  • genuinely happy
  • recognized
  • boosts my confidence
  • motivates me

Idea 2

Embarrassed or Shy
Model Answer
I feel a bit embarrassed when people praise me. I'm not used to it, and it makes me shy, especially if it's in front of others.
I sometimes feel embarrassed or shy when I'm praised because I'm not used to receiving compliments. I tend to be modest and prefer private praise rather than public recognition.
Grammar Analysis
1.Usage of adverbs of frequency: "I sometimes feel embarrassed or shy" uses "sometimes" to indicate the frequency of feeling embarrassed, showing the ability to use adverbs of frequency accurately. 2.Contrast with "rather than": The phrase "prefer private praise rather than public recognition" uses "rather than" to contrast two different preferences, demonstrating the ability to express preferences and contrasts clearly.
Vocabulary
  • embarrassed or shy
  • modest
  • private praise
  • public recognition

Idea 3

Reflective and Grateful
Model Answer
When praised, I feel grateful and think about how I can keep doing well. It makes me appreciate the support from others.
When I'm praised, I feel reflective and grateful for the feedback. It makes me think about how I can continue to contribute positively and build better relationships with others.
Grammar Analysis
1.Use of present simple tense: The answer uses the present simple tense ("I feel", "It makes me think") to describe general feelings and reactions, which is appropriate for expressing habitual responses. 2.Use of infinitive phrases: The sentence "to contribute positively and build better relationships" uses infinitive phrases to express purpose or intention, adding depth to the response.
Vocabulary
  • reflective
  • grateful
  • contribute positively
  • build better relationships