Band 7 Example
Topic: Describe an activity you enjoyed in your free time when you were young
Example
A meal for the family What it was I'm going to talk about the time I cooked a huge meal for all my family at my house about one month ago. Where you did it The cooking and dining all took place in my home, specifically in the kitchen and dining area which we had decorated lightly for the occasion. Who you did it with I was assisted by my uncle, who is a professional chef. He guided me through the entire process, from planning the menu to the actual cooking. The rest of my family, including my parents, sister, and cousins, were the guests who enjoyed the meal. And explain why you enjoyed it I thoroughly enjoyed this activity for several reasons. Firstly, it was a chance to bond with my uncle over our shared love for cooking. Learning from him as we prepared each dish was not only educational but also incredibly fun. Secondly, the joy and satisfaction that came from seeing my family enjoy the food we had prepared was immense. It was a fulfilling experience to cater to their tastes and preferences, making the occasion even more special. Lastly, the entire process of organizing, cooking, and hosting the meal was a rewarding challenge that left me tired but very happy. It was a memorable day that combined family, food, and fun, making it a truly enjoyable experience.
Grammar Analysis
The response effectively uses a variety of grammatical structures which contribute to a clear and detailed narrative. It employs past continuous and simple past tenses accurately to describe the event, such as in "I'm going to talk about the time I cooked" and "we had decorated." The use of modal verbs like "was" and "were" correctly sets the scene in the past. Additionally, the answer is well-organized with clear transitions from one section to another, marked by headings for each part of the cue card, which helps in maintaining a logical flow. The use of conjunctions and prepositions effectively links ideas and adds coherence to the narrative, as seen in "from planning the menu to the actual cooking."
Vocabulary
  • - **huge meal**: Indicates the scale of the cooking endeavor.
  • - **decorated lightly**: Suggests a festive but not overdone atmosphere.
  • - **professional chef**: Highlights the expertise brought into the cooking process.
  • - **guided me through**: Implies detailed and supportive instruction.
  • - **educational but also incredibly fun**: Contrasts learning with enjoyment, enhancing the appeal of the experience.
  • - **joy and satisfaction**: Emotional benefits derived from the activity.
  • - **fulfilling experience**: Suggests a deep sense of achievement.
  • - **rewarding challenge**: Conveys that the effort was worthwhile despite difficulties.
  • - **memorable day**: Emphasizes the lasting impact of the experience.
  • These vocabulary choices enrich the narrative by providing specific details and emotional depth, painting a vivid picture of the experience and its impact.