Band 7 Example

Question: Do people in your country often invite others to their homes? Why?

Idea 1

Yes, they do
Model Answer
Yes, it's often better to have a social gathering at someone's home instead of a restaurant. I think it shows closeness with the guests, as inviting someone to your home is personal. It means you trust them and it's more informal, so people can relax and be themselves.
Yes, actually it’s preferable to have a social gathering at someone’s home rather than in a restaurant or somewhere. I think it’s a sign of closeness to the guests because inviting someone into your house is quite a personal thing. It shows that you trust that person and it’s also less formal, so people can unwind and be themselves more.
Grammar Analysis
Using the present participle as an adverbial phrase, "inviting someone into your house" emphasizes the current and ongoing nature of the invitation, adding complexity to the sentence. Comparative form, "less formal," is used to contrast the formality of hosting a party at home versus at a restaurant, clearly expressing the difference between the two situations. Modal verb, "can unwind," uses the modal verb "can" to express possibility, indicating that people can relax in a more informal environment.
Vocabulary
  • social gathering
  • preferable
  • a sign of
  • personal
  • trust
  • less formal
  • unwind

Idea 2

No, they do not
Model Answer
No, not exactly. Many people live in small flats with limited space, so it's hard to entertain guests. Some also see it as invading their privacy, so they don't invite people other than family to their homes. Plus, neighbors can be a concern, as we need to be quiet at home due to people living above and below us.
No, not really. The reason is that most people live in quite small flats so there isn’t much space for entertaining. Some people also feel like it’s an invasion of their privacy too so never invite anyone outside the family to their home. Neighbors can also be an issue as we have to be relatively quiet at home because we are surrounded by people above and below us too.
Grammar Analysis
Reason adverbial clause: "The reason is that most people live in quite small flats" Using a reason adverbial clause to explain why it is not suitable to entertain guests at home adds logic and depth to the sentence. Condition adverbial clause: "as we have to be relatively quiet at home" Using a condition adverbial clause to explain the reason for needing to be relatively quiet at home emphasizes the impact of residential environment limitations on lifestyle.
Vocabulary
  • flats
  • space for entertaining
  • an invasion of their privacy
  • outside the family
  • issue
  • surrounded by