Band 7 Example
Question: ls it necessary to give advice to children?
Idea 1
Yes, it is
Model Answer
Definitely. Young people need guidance to handle life's challenges. We go through a lot, and when we're young, it's hard to know how to deal with everything. This sometimes leads to bad decisions. Without someone to guide us, it's difficult to make good choices.
Idea 2
No, not always
Model Answer
No, not always. I believe children should sometimes make their own mistakes to learn from them. It helps them become more independent and self-reliant. If someone is always advising them and telling them what to do, they might become indecisive and unable to function without others' support when that person is no longer there.