Band 7 Example
Question: What goals should a society have?
Idea 1
Economic Development
Model Answer
I think it's really important to balance between rich people and poor people. The money made by a society should be shared fairly among everyone. If not, there will be problems later on. People need to feel they are part of society's growth, or else they might feel left out.
Idea 2
Social Welfare
Model Answer
Nowadays, healthcare is a big thing that people care about, so having healthcare for everyone is an important goal. With technology getting better quickly, medical care is also improving, and people know this. They want to get help when they need it. As the population in many countries is aging, more countries are trying to find ways to provide healthcare to all.