购物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は直接的で短く自然ですが、詳細が少なく一般的です。トピック文の後に具体例や頻度、好む商品の種類を付け加えると良いです。語彙や表現を少し広げ、リンク語（例えば“for example”や“usually”）を使って流れを良くしましょう。例えば「どのくらいの頻度で」「どんな商品を」探すかを述べると高得点につながります。

範例: Yes, I do. I usually browse online marketplaces a few times a week to look for electronics and home décor. For example, last week I spent an evening comparing lamps and cushions to update my living room.

建議: 答えは明確ですが理由の説明が単純で具体性に欠けます。代わりに短い理由文に加え、代替行動（例えばブランドやレビューを重視する）や例を示すと良いです。接続詞（for this reason, insteadなど）を使い論理を明確にしましょう。

範例: Not really. I rarely compare prices because I'm usually short on time; instead, I focus on trusted brands and read a few reviews to make a quick decision.

建議: 答えはシンプルで問題に直接答えていますが、支援となる具体例や状況の説明があるとより説得力が増します。例えば、買い物前にリストを作る、予算を決めるなど選択を容易にする習慣を述べると良いです。リンク語（because, so, therefore）を維持して論理を繋げてください。

範例: Not really, because I usually make a shopping list beforehand and know exactly what I need. For instance, when I shop for groceries I stick to my list, which makes decisions quick and easy.

建議: 意見は明確で例もありますが、文法と詳細の面で改善の余地があります。例を述べるときは過去形や代名詞の一致に注意し、なぜ高価が必ずしも良いとは限らないかを理由（品質、デザイン、適合性）で補強してください。接続語（however, for example）で論理をつなぐと良いです。

範例: I don't think so. For example, I bought an expensive kitchen knife yesterday, but it turned out to be too large for my hands, so it wasn't practical. Therefore, price doesn't always equal suitability or better performance.

× Yes I do. I tend to browse shopping marketplace to look for something I like.

✓ Yes, I do. I tend to browse shopping marketplaces to look for something I like.

Sentence uses a noun phrase 'shopping marketplace'. The main issue is noun form (singular/plural) and article omission; primary applicable type from the provided list is 'Verb + -ing form' because 'browse' collocates with 'shopping' as a modifier. Correct by making 'marketplaces' plural and adding a comma after 'Yes' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'browse shopping marketplaces' or 'browse online marketplaces'.

× I don't compare the price of items because I don't have enough time to consider which items are cheaper or not.

✓ I don't compare the prices of items because I don't have enough time to consider which items are cheaper or not.

The noun 'price' should be plural ('prices') when referring to more than one item's cost. Also 'the price of items' is less natural than 'the prices of items'. Suggestion: use 'compare prices' as the common collocation.

× Not really, because I often look for something I want so it's not difficult for me.

✓ Not really, because I often look for something I want, so it's not difficult for me.

Run-on sentence needs a comma before 'so' to join the clauses correctly. This is a sentence structure issue. Suggestion: add a comma to separate the clauses or split into two sentences.

× I don't think so. For example, when I bought knives yesterday, I realized that it not suits for me because it's bigger than I thought.

✓ I don't think so. For example, when I bought a knife yesterday, I realized that it did not suit me because it was bigger than I thought.

Multiple problems: singular/plural and article ('knives' vs 'a knife'), verb agreement and use of past tense. The phrase 'it not suits for me' is incorrect: use past simple 'did not suit me' or 'didn't suit me'; 'suit' does not take 'for' in this sense. Also comparison requires past tense 'was bigger'. Classified here as 'Verb in the past participle form' because the incorrect verb form and auxiliary usage appear. Suggestions: use 'a knife' (if one knife), 'didn't suit me', and 'was bigger than I thought'.