购物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer grammatically correct, concise, and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason with linking words. Avoid redundancy and incorrect words (e.g. "spent", "stuffs").

範例: Not really. I only buy things I need, so shopping feels like a chore rather than a pleasure. For example, I usually make a list beforehand to avoid browsing and overspending.

建議: Use clearer grammar and more precise vocabulary. Begin with a direct statement, then give one specific reason and an example. Use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly and avoid repetition.

範例: Yes, I usually compare prices because I want to find the most affordable option. For instance, I often check two or three stores or use price comparison apps to make sure I'm getting good value.

建議: Be concise and correct verb forms and nouns. Give a short topic sentence and one brief supporting detail with a linking word. Replace vague words with precise ones.

範例: No, it's not difficult. Because I plan and make a shopping list beforehand, I already know what I need and avoid impulse purchases.

建議: Clarify your opinion and provide a specific reason with clearer vocabulary. Avoid unclear phrases (e.g. "egg fatties", "brand effective"); instead use phrases like "brand premium" or "higher price due to branding". Add a brief example.

範例: No, I don't think so. Sometimes expensive items cost more because of the brand rather than better quality, so I usually read reviews or compare materials before buying.

× No, I'm relatively don't like shopping because I only buy the stuffs I really need and I think I don't enjoy the spent.

✓ No, I don't really like shopping because I only buy the stuff I really need, and I don't enjoy spending money.

Errors: misuse of 'I'm relatively don't like' — wrong auxiliary and adverb order (Grammar Problem Type IDs 2 and 13 apply, but primary is incorrect adverb/auxiliary usage). 'Relatively' is awkward; 'really' is more natural. 'Stuffs' is uncountable here so use 'stuff' (Grammar Problem Type ID 1). 'I think I don't enjoy the spent' uses incorrect noun 'spent' and missing object; correct verb form is 'spending money' (Verb + -ing form, ID 8). Suggestion: use 'I don't really like' (auxiliary do + adverb before main verb), use 'stuff' for uncountable items, and use 'spending money' to express the action.

× Yes, I will compare prices when I shop because I will compare this items and get more affordable and suitable price.

✓ Yes, I compare prices when I shop because I compare these items to find a more affordable and suitable price.

Errors: unnecessary future 'will' for habitual action; use present simple for routines (Present tense issue, ID 6). 'This items' uses wrong demonstrative and plural agreement — should be 'these items' (Singular and plural issue, ID 1). 'Get more affordable and suitable price' is unidiomatic and missing article — use 'find a more affordable and suitable price' (Article errors, ID 22). Suggestion: use present simple for habits, match demonstrative number with noun, and include 'a' before 'more affordable and suitable price' or rephrase to 'a more affordable and suitable price'.

× No, like I said, I usually decided what stuffs I really need before I go to shop, so I will not. It's not difficult for me to make a choice.

✓ No, like I said, I usually decide what stuff I really need before I go shopping, so I don't. It's not difficult for me to make a choice.

Errors: 'usually decided' uses past tense but speaker refers to a habitual present action — use present simple 'usually decide' (Past tense issue, ID 5 and Present tense issue, ID 6). 'Stuffs' should be 'stuff' (Singular and plural issue, ID 1). 'Before I go to shop' is unidiomatic; use 'before I go shopping' (Incorrect use of prepositions/verb + -ing form, IDs 11 and 8). 'So I will not' is inappropriate for present habit; use 'so I don't.' Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions, use 'shopping' after 'go', and use 'stuff' for uncountable noun.

× No I don't think so. Some expensive products have have some egg fatties like brand effective or some things it's values are overvalued.

✓ No, I don't think so. Some expensive products have some features, such as brand reputation, or their value is overrated.

Errors: repeated word 'have have' — remove duplication (Sentence structure errors, ID 26). 'Egg fatties' appears to be incorrect word choice or mispronunciation; replace with 'features' (Incorrect use of adjectives or nouns, ID 13). 'Like brand effective' is ungrammatical; intended meaning likely 'brand reputation' or 'brand effect' — 'brand reputation' is natural (Incorrect use of adjectives/phrases, ID 13). 'Some things it's values are overvalued' contains incorrect pronoun and possessive structure; use 'their value is overrated' (Incorrect use of pronouns, ID 12; Comparative/superlative wording, ID 25). Suggestion: remove duplicate words, choose accurate vocabulary ('features', 'brand reputation'), and use 'their value is overrated' to express that the price exceeds true value.