聚会— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Speak more directly and correct small grammar errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two concise reasons with linking words. For example, correct 'introvert person' to 'an introvert' and 'use much energy of myself' to 'use a lot of energy'. Keep answers to no more than 3–4 sentences.

範例: I don't really like going to parties because I'm an introvert. For instance, large gatherings drain my energy, so I prefer small get-togethers. However, I will attend if it's an important family event.

建議: Improve grammar and clarity: use past tense consistently and give specific frequency (e.g. 'rarely' or 'a few times a year'). Use linking words like 'usually' or 'mostly' and finish the sentence. Avoid trailing off.

範例: I rarely had parties as a child. Mostly we had birthday parties, maybe once or twice a year, and we usually celebrated at home with close family.

建議: Be concise and correct informal contractions and tense. Use a clear topic sentence and give a brief reason with a linking word like 'because' or 'so'. Replace 'wanna' with 'want to' and 'use so much energy' with 'use a lot of energy'.

範例: No, I have never organized a party. I usually just participate because organizing takes a lot of effort and energy, which I prefer to avoid.

× Umm no I don't really like going to parties because I think I am introvert person so if I have to go to party I will use much energy of myself.

✓ Umm, no. I don't really like going to parties because I think I am an introverted person, so if I have to go to a party I will use up a lot of my energy.

Errors: article and adjective form, singular/plural, word choice and reflexive phrasing. Identify relevant grammar problem types: 1 (Singular and plural issue), 12 (Incorrect use of pronouns), 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs), 22 (Article errors), 26 (Sentence structure errors). Reasons and suggestions: 'introvert person' is incorrect word form; use 'an introverted person' or 'an introvert' and include the indefinite article 'an' before a noun starting with a vowel sound. 'go to party' needs the article 'a party'. 'use much energy of myself' is unidiomatic; English uses 'use up a lot of my energy' or 'it uses a lot of my energy'. Add commas to separate clauses for clarity. Improve by saying 'I am an introverted person' and 'I will use up a lot of my energy.'

× It wasn't happens frequently.

✓ It didn't happen frequently.

Errors: wrong tense and auxiliary usage, subject-verb agreement form. Relevant grammar types: 5 (Past tense issue), 27 (Subject-verb agreement errors). Reason and suggestion: 'It wasn't happens' mixes past negative auxiliary with a present participle; in past simple negative use 'didn't' + base verb 'happen'. Use 'It didn't happen frequently.'

× I only have party like a birthday party or someone's birthday party.

✓ I only had parties like birthday parties or someone's birthday party.

Errors: tense, singular/plural, article usage. Relevant grammar types: 1 (Singular and plural issue), 5 (Past tense issue), 22 (Article errors). Reasons and suggestions: The question asked about childhood (past), so use past tense 'had'. 'Party' should be plural if referring to occasions: 'parties' and 'birthday parties' is more natural. Alternatively, 'I only had parties for birthdays.'

× So it cost me like I don't really like going to the.

✓ So it felt costly for me; I don't really like going to them.

Errors: sentence structure, word choice, pronoun reference, incomplete sentence. Relevant grammar types: 26 (Sentence structure errors), 12 (Incorrect use of pronouns). Reasons and suggestions: 'So it cost me' is literal and odd here; better to say 'it felt costly' or 'it takes a lot out of me.' The sentence also ends abruptly 'to the.' Replace with 'going to them' referring to parties. Combine into 'So it felt costly for me; I don't really like going to parties.'

× No, I never organised any party.

✓ No, I never organized a party.

Errors: article and word choice. Relevant grammar types: 22 (Article errors), 1 (Singular and plural issue). Reasons and suggestions: Use 'a party' rather than 'any party' in affirmative negative statements about single events; 'any' is possible but 'I never organized a party' is more natural. Also maintain consistent spelling variety (organized/organised) depending on US/UK English.

× I just, uh, participated in the events because I don't wanna use so much energy.

✓ I just participated in events because I don't want to use so much energy.

Errors: informal contraction and article usage. Relevant grammar types: 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs), 22 (Article errors), 4 (Modal verb usage) for 'wanna' informal. Reasons and suggestions: Replace informal 'wanna' with 'want to'. Omit 'the' before 'events' unless specific events are meant. Keep tense consistent: past 'participated' is fine given context about past behaviour. Alternatively, for present habit: 'I just participate in events because I don't want to use so much energy.'