聚会— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by using correct grammar and vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add a reason or example. Avoid unclear phrases like 'interview person' and 'charge feeling'.

範例: I don't really enjoy parties because I find them exhausting rather than energising. For example, I prefer quiet activities where I can relax and recharge instead of social gatherings.

建議: Improve sentence structure and grammar to make your answer clearer. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, be more specific about how often you had parties and why.

範例: I rarely had parties when I was a kid because my parents and grandma were quite strict. They worried about my safety, so they didn't allow me to go out with friends often. As a result, I usually stayed at home.

建議: Use correct verb tenses and clearer sentence structures. Start with a direct answer, then add specific details using linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: No, I have never organised a party myself. However, I know that hostels often spend a lot of time planning parties. For example, they contact guests to confirm attendance and arrange food and drinks.

× I don't like party as I'm an interview person.

✓ I don't like parties as I'm an introvert person.

The word 'party' should be plural 'parties' because it refers to parties in general. Also, 'interview person' seems to be a misuse; likely the intended word is 'introvert person' meaning someone who prefers solitude.

× Party cannot give me more energy and we charge feeling but for some extra full person they do like party to connect others people and get more.

✓ Parties cannot give me more energy or a charged feeling, but some extroverted people do like parties to connect with others and get more energy.

The sentence has incorrect adjective use: 'extra full person' should be 'extroverted person'. Also, 'we charge feeling' is incorrect; it should be 'a charged feeling'. 'Others people' should be 'others' or 'other people'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× No, I rarely have party.

✓ No, I rarely have parties.

The noun 'party' should be plural 'parties' because it refers to parties in general, not a single party.

× When I was kid a party.

✓ When I was a kid, I rarely had parties.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. It lacks a verb and article before 'kid'. The corrected sentence adds 'a' before 'kid' and completes the thought with 'I rarely had parties'.

× They don't want me to hang out with friends too often.

✓ They didn't want me to hang out with friends too often.

The tense should be past ('didn't want') to match the time frame 'when I was a kid'. The pronoun 'me' is correct here.

× They worry about my safety issues so I prefer stay at home instead.

✓ They worried about my safety, so I preferred to stay at home instead.

The verb tense should be past ('worried', 'preferred') to match the past context. Also, 'prefer stay' is incorrect; it should be 'preferred to stay'. The phrase 'safety issues' is better as 'safety' here.

× No, I'm rarely organized a party but I heard some hostels do a lot and spending a lot of time to organise a party.

✓ No, I have rarely organized a party, but I heard some hostels do a lot and spend a lot of time organising parties.

The present perfect tense 'have rarely organized' is appropriate for experience. 'I'm rarely organized' is incorrect. Also, 'spending' should be 'spend' to agree with 'hostels do'. 'Organise a party' should be plural 'organising parties' for general meaning.

× For example, they would contact the people whether they can come or organise the food ingredients.

✓ For example, they would contact the people to see whether they can come or organise the food ingredients.

The conjunction 'whether' needs to be preceded by 'to see' or similar phrase to be grammatically correct. The sentence is corrected to include 'to see whether'.