聚会— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevaplarınız doğal ve samimi ancak bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar mevcut. "Who don't?" ifadesi yanlış ve "attending to parties" yerine "attending parties" daha doğru olur. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizde daha akıcı bağlaçlar kullanarak ifadelerinizi geliştirebilirsiniz.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy parties because they give me a chance to relax and socialize. I love spending time with my friends, listening to music, and enjoying some food and drinks together. Overall, parties are a great way to have fun and connect with others.

建議: Cevabınız doğrudan soruya yanıt veriyor ancak bazı ifadeler tekrarlı ve dilbilgisi açısından geliştirilebilir. "Throwing a party or attending a party" yerine daha kısa ve etkili ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz. Ayrıca, bağlaçlarla cümlelerinizi daha akıcı hale getirebilirsiniz.

範例: I didn't have many parties as a child because parties are not very common in my country. However, I think I would have enjoyed them if they were more popular where I grew up.

建議: Cevabınız kısa ve eksik kalmış, ayrıca bazı cümleler tamamlanmamış. Daha detaylı ve akıcı cevaplar vermeye çalışın. Örneğin, partinin nasıl geçtiği, kimlerin katıldığı gibi detaylar ekleyebilirsiniz.

範例: Yes, I have organized a small party for my birthday. It was a simple gathering with close friends and family, and we enjoyed good food and music together.

× Of course, who don't?

✓ Of course, who doesn't?

The subject 'who' is singular, so the verb should be 'doesn't' instead of 'don't' to agree in number.

× Actually, I really love.

✓ Actually, I really love it.

The sentence is incomplete; 'love' is a transitive verb and requires an object. Adding 'it' completes the sentence.

× I really enjoy attending to parties.

✓ I really enjoy attending parties.

The verb 'attend' is not followed by the preposition 'to'; it directly takes the object.

× So yeah, who don't like that?

✓ So yeah, who doesn't like that?

Again, 'who' is singular and requires the singular verb form 'doesn't' instead of 'don't'.

× How often did you have a party when you were a kid?

✓ How often did you have parties when you were a kid?

The plural form 'parties' is more appropriate here because 'how often' implies multiple occasions.

× it's not that popular to party or throwing a party or attending a party.

✓ it's not that popular to party or throw a party or attend a party.

After 'to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form.

× I really enjoy attending to parties.

✓ I really enjoy attending parties.

The verb 'attend' does not require the preposition 'to' before its object.

× So I'm not that used to it, but I think I would love it if it was popular in our country.

✓ So I'm not that used to it, but I think I would love it if it were popular in our country.

In conditional sentences expressing hypothetical situations, 'were' is used instead of 'was' for all subjects.

× Actually. It was not that big, but I did.

✓ Actually, it was not that big, but I did.

The period after 'Actually' should be a comma to connect the sentence properly.

× It was for my birthday and I you know.

✓ It was for my birthday, you know.

The phrase 'and I you know' is incorrect and unnecessary; removing 'and I' clarifies the sentence.