聚会— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally relevant but a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to keep your sentences clear and concise, avoid redundancy, and ensure your ideas flow logically. Also, avoid incomplete or confusing phrases like 'and additional I really like party how to allow?'.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy parties because they provide a great chance to socialise and relax with friends. For example, celebrating birthdays together creates a lively and enjoyable atmosphere.

建議: Your answer is on the right track but incomplete and slightly unclear at the end. Make sure to complete your sentences and provide specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid vague phrases like 'because they were full of.'

範例: When I was a kid, I had parties quite often, mostly for birthdays or my parents' anniversaries. For instance, we would gather with family and close friends at least once a month, which made these occasions very memorable and enjoyable.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by correcting minor grammatical errors and enhancing coherence. For example, use past tense consistently ('wanted' instead of 'want') and add linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I have. Last month, I organised a party for my friend from scratch, which was quite stressful because I had to manage everything on my own. However, I wanted to be involved in the celebration and ensure everyone enjoyed themselves. Therefore, I put a lot of effort into planning the food, decorations, and activities.

× For example, you can celebrate birthday with your friends and then you can feel the atmosphere and additional I really like party how to allow?

✓ For example, you can celebrate a birthday with your friends and then you can feel the atmosphere. Additionally, I really like parties because they allow...

The sentence has multiple issues: 'celebrate birthday' lacks the article 'a'; 'additional' is incorrectly used instead of 'additionally'; 'party how to allow?' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The correction adds the article, replaces 'additional' with 'additionally' to properly connect ideas, and rephrases the unclear part to make sense. Suggestions: use articles correctly before singular countable nouns, use proper linking adverbs, and ensure sentence clarity.

× How often did you have a party when you were a kid?

✓ How often did you have parties when you were a kid?

The question uses 'a party' which is singular, but generally, the question is about frequency of multiple events, so plural 'parties' is more appropriate. This aligns with the plural usage in the answer. Suggestion: use plural form when referring to repeated or multiple events in the past.

× I used to have several parties when I was a child, mostly to celebrate my birthday or my parent anniversaries.

✓ I used to have several parties when I was a child, mostly to celebrate my birthday or my parents' anniversaries.

The phrase 'my parent anniversaries' is incorrect because 'parent' should be plural possessive 'parents'' to indicate anniversaries belonging to both parents. Suggestion: use possessive form correctly when indicating ownership or association.

× I always looked forward to see a special occasion because they were full of.

✓ I always looked forward to seeing a special occasion because they were full of joy.

The phrase 'looked forward to see' is incorrect; after 'look forward to' the verb should be in -ing form ('seeing'). Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'full of' missing an object. Suggestion: use gerund after 'look forward to' and complete sentences with appropriate objects.

× Last month I organized a party for my friend from the scratch, which was quite stressful because I had to manage everything on my own.

✓ Last month I organized a party for my friend from scratch, which was quite stressful because I had to manage everything on my own.

The phrase 'from the scratch' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'from scratch' without 'the'. Suggestion: learn and use fixed expressions correctly.

× I really want to be involved in the celebration and make sure everyone enjoyed themselves.

✓ I really wanted to be involved in the celebration and make sure everyone enjoyed themselves.

The sentence refers to a past event ('Last month I organized a party'), so the verb 'want' should be in past tense 'wanted' to maintain tense consistency. Suggestion: match verb tense with the time frame of the event.