聚会— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as 'mingle two different people' which is unclear; instead, say 'mingle with different people'. Also, correct grammar errors like 'go to party' should be 'go to parties'. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I enjoy parties because they give me a chance to mingle with different people and enjoy good food. Therefore, I often go to parties on weekends, either alone or with friends, to relax and meet new people.

建議: Your answer is unclear and fragmented. Try to form complete sentences and respond directly to the question. Use linking words to explain frequency and reasons. For example, mention how often you had birthday parties and why they were important.

範例: When I was a kid, I usually had birthday parties once a year. These were the only parties we celebrated, and they were very special occasions for me and my family.

建議: Your answer has grammar mistakes and incomplete sentences. Use correct verb forms and complete your thoughts. Also, explain your experience clearly with linking words to improve coherence.

範例: I am not fond of organizing parties, but I did organize one for my oldest nephew because it was his first birthday celebration. Therefore, I hired a photographer to capture the special moments.

× I like parties because I love to mingle two different people and to enjoy the food.

✓ I like parties because I love mingling with different people and enjoying the food.

The verb 'love' is followed by the gerund form when expressing enjoyment of activities. Also, 'mingle' requires the preposition 'with' to indicate the people involved.

× Because of this, I go to party every weekend.

✓ Because of this, I go to parties every weekend.

The noun 'party' should be plural 'parties' to match the frequency 'every weekend', indicating multiple events.

× With myself or with my friends, just to relax and to meet new people.

✓ By myself or with my friends, just to relax and meet new people.

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is correctly used here, but the preposition 'with' is incorrect; 'by myself' is the correct phrase to indicate being alone. Also, 'to' before 'meet' is unnecessary after 'and'.

× But I was a kid.

✓ When I was a kid.

The sentence fragment 'But I was a kid.' is incomplete and awkward. Starting with 'When I was a kid' provides a proper temporal context.

× Birthday parties were the common party for. Children because that time it is the. Only. Party window and the. In the only celebration. We do.

✓ Birthday parties were the common parties for children because at that time they were the only parties and the only celebrations we had.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Correcting sentence structure and verb tenses clarifies the meaning and improves coherence.

× I am not fund to organize party but I organized ones for my nephew because he is my oldest nephew that time and it was our first time to celebrate party.

✓ I am not fond of organizing parties but I organized one for my nephew because he was my oldest nephew at that time and it was our first time celebrating a party.

'Fund' is a typo for 'fond'. 'Fond of' requires the gerund form 'organizing'. 'Ones' should be singular 'one' to match 'party'. Verb tenses are adjusted for past context. 'Celebrate party' should be 'celebrating a party'.

× So I hired photographer and the.

✓ So I hired a photographer.

The noun 'photographer' requires an indefinite article 'a'. The phrase 'and the' is incomplete and unnecessary.