应用程序— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Javobni qisqaroq va tabiiyroq qiling; grammatikani tuzating va keraksiz so‘zlarni olib tashlang. Masalan, boshlang‘ich gapda “If I think about this” yoki “in my opinion” kabi takrorlarni ishlatish kerak emas. Iltimos, fe’llar va predloglardan to‘g‘ri foydalaning (masalan, “used Pinterest”, “I find everything I need”, “I am interested in it”). Javob 2–3 jumlada bo‘lishi kerak.

範例: I recently used Pinterest. I find it very interesting and entertaining because I can discover ideas and items I need for my projects.

建議: Javob aniq emas va ko‘p grammatik xatolar bor; ism va rollarni noaniq keltirmang. Iltimos, qaysi turdagi ilovalarni yoqtirishingizni to‘g‘ri ifoda eting (masalan, “puzzle” yoki “educational games”), va sababni qisqacha tushuntiring. 2–3 jumladan oshmasin.

範例: I usually enjoy puzzle and educational game apps because they challenge my problem-solving skills and help me relax after work.

建議: Javob yaxshi asosga ega, lekin sintaksis va takroriy so‘zlarni tuzatish kerak. “Use from” noto‘g‘ri; to‘g‘ri ibora “use” yoki “download”. Bog‘lovchi so‘zlardan foydalanib gaplarni aniq qilib bering (masalan, “and”, “so”, “then”). 2–3 jumlali mantiqiy tartibda javob bering.

範例: I usually learn about new apps from friends and relatives. If I have time, I also search online and try an app; if it seems useful, I download and use it regularly.

建議: Javob tushunarsiz va so‘z tanlash xatoliklari ko‘p. Aniq maqsadingizni ayting: qaysi turdagi ilovalar kerakligini va nega (masalan, “math teaching apps” yoki “interactive practice apps”). Oddiy va aniq iboralarni ishlating, va 1–2 sabab bering.

範例: In the future I would like to use math teaching apps that offer interactive exercises and quizzes because I am a maths teacher and they would help my students practise concepts more effectively.

× If I think about this in my opinion, I recently used from the Pinterest because it's very interesting and very entertaining for me.

✓ If I think about it, I recently used Pinterest because it's very interesting and entertaining for me.

You used incorrect prepositions and redundant phrases. 'Used from the Pinterest' is wrong; use 'used Pinterest' or 'used the Pinterest app' (no 'from'). 'If I think about this in my opinion' is redundant; use 'If I think about it' or 'In my opinion.' Improve by removing extra words and using correct preposition patterns. Suggestions: say 'In my opinion' or 'If I think about it', and use verb + object (use Pinterest), not 'use from'.

× When I use from them, I can find everything entities I need and I interested it.

✓ When I use it, I can find everything I need and I am interested in it.

Pronoun and verb forms are incorrect. 'Use from them' should be 'use it' (Pinterest is singular). 'Everything entities I need' is wrong; use 'everything I need.' 'I interested it' is incorrect structure; use 'I am interested in it.' Suggest practicing object pronouns and correct verb + preposition combinations.

× Most of the time I use from the maze game of apps because I am amazed teacher and I must find a game that is.

✓ Most of the time I use maze game apps because I am an amazed teacher and I must find a game like that.

'Use from the maze game of apps' is incorrect ordering and preposition use; use 'use maze game apps' or 'use the maze game app.' 'Amazed teacher' likely needs an article 'an' and 'a game that is' is incomplete; replace with 'a game like that.' Suggest correct word order and articles, and complete comparative phrases.

× It's very interesting for every chiller.

✓ It's very interesting for every child.

Incorrect word 'chiller' instead of 'child.' Use correct noun. Also preposition 'for every child' is fine. Suggest checking vocabulary and spelling.

× For this reason, I try to act like Miss Kim.

✓ For this reason, I try to act like Miss Kim.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable but may be semantically odd. No change required except context. Keep as is.

× Most of the time I try to speak with my friends or my relatives about the apps and this time they tell me about some new apps and sometimes when I have enough time I just try to find it and use from it.

✓ Most of the time I try to speak with my friends or relatives about apps; they tell me about new ones, and sometimes when I have enough time I try to find them and use them.

Wrong prepositions and pronouns: 'my relatives' is fine but 'about the apps' should be 'about apps' or 'about the apps' depending. 'Find it and use from it' should be 'find them and use them' (plural 'apps'). Also tense consistency: 'they tell me' can be 'they tell me' or 'they tell me about new ones.' Suggest matching pronouns to plural nouns and removing 'use from.'

× If if I find it useful, I use from them in everyday.

✓ If I find them useful, I use them every day.

Duplicate 'If if' is an error. 'Find it useful' vs plural antecedent should be 'find them useful.' 'Use from them' incorrect preposition; use 'use them.' 'In everyday' should be 'every day' (two words) for frequency. Suggest careful proofreading and matching number.

× From a positive, in the future I can try to abstract my skin because I am a math math teacher and for the reason I must find some maths game mice.

✓ On a positive note, in the future I can try to improve my skills because I am a math teacher and therefore I must find some math games.

Many vocabulary and preposition errors: 'From a positive' should be 'On a positive note.' 'Abstract my skin' is incorrect; likely intended 'improve my skills.' 'Math math teacher' redundant; use 'math teacher.' 'For the reason' should be 'therefore' or 'because.' 'Maths game mice' is nonsense; use 'math games.' Suggest using correct idioms and collocations and checking word choice.