历史— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答が不自然で文法的に誤りがあります。主語と動詞の一致や時制の使い方に注意し、簡潔で明確な文を作る練習をしましょう。

範例: Yes, I studied world history in high school, and it helped me broaden my experience and learn a lot.

建議: 内容が不明瞭で、'Kindly Courageous'の意味がわかりません。具体的な学習方法を説明し、明確な語彙を使うようにしましょう。

範例: I learned history by reading textbooks and attending lectures in high school. Although it was challenging, I found it important to understand past events.

建議: 文法と語彙の誤りがあります。'broaden perspective'は'broaden our perspective'にし、'produce'は文脈に合った単語に変えましょう。具体的な利益を明確に述べることが大切です。

範例: One notable advantage of learning history is that it broadens our perspective about different cultures and products, which helps us live and communicate better.

建議: 文法的な誤りがあり、意味が伝わりにくいです。'enable to be more flexible'は正しい表現に直し、内容を明確にしましょう。

範例: Yes, I think learning history is important because it helps me understand how people lived in the past and makes me more open-minded.

× Yes, our hobby.

✓ Yes, it is my hobby.

The original sentence 'Yes, our hobby.' is incomplete and unclear. It lacks a verb and subject agreement. The corrected sentence 'Yes, it is my hobby.' properly answers the question with a subject and verb, making it a complete sentence.

× I study world history when I was in high school and it helps me broaden my experience and I can learn from this.

✓ I studied world history when I was in high school, and it helped me broaden my experience and learn from it.

The verb 'study' should be in past tense 'studied' to match the time frame 'when I was in high school.' Also, 'helps' should be 'helped' to maintain past tense consistency. 'I can learn from this' is better as 'learn from it' for clarity and conciseness.

× I.

The sentence fragment 'I.' is incomplete and should be removed or completed to form a meaningful sentence.

× I used to learn history at high school and it is very difficult for me, but I think it's very important to learn about Kindly Courageous.

✓ I used to learn history at high school, and it was very difficult for me, but I think it's very important to learn about Kindly Courageous.

The phrase 'it is very difficult' should be in past tense 'it was very difficult' to match 'used to learn.' This maintains tense consistency. Also, a comma is added for clarity.

× One notable advantage of learning history is that we can get broaden perspective about culture and produce, so it is very important and convenient to live and contact.

✓ One notable advantage of learning history is that we can broaden our perspective about culture and products, so it is very important and convenient for living and communication.

The phrase 'get broaden perspective' is incorrect; it should be 'broaden our perspective.' 'Produce' should be 'products.' 'To live and contact' is awkward; 'for living and communication' is more natural. Prepositions are corrected for proper usage.

× Yes, I think it is important because learning history enable to be more flexible and it's giving me a sense of excitement because I can learn how to people live in the past.

✓ Yes, I think it is important because learning history enables me to be more flexible, and it gives me a sense of excitement because I can learn how people lived in the past.

The verb 'enable' needs to be 'enables me to' to be grammatically correct. 'It's giving me' should be 'it gives me' for present simple tense. 'How to people live' is incorrect; it should be 'how people lived' to express past tense.