历史— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá đầy đủ nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ, bạn nên dùng 'has' thay vì 'have' khi nói về 'every student'. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, of course. History is a compulsory subject that every student in my country has to learn. We mainly study historical events not only in Vietnam but also around the world because I believe it's really important for teenagers to understand their origins.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý thì động từ cho phù hợp và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, nên dùng số nhiều cho danh từ đếm được như 'movies' và 'historical buildings'.

範例: I usually learn history by using a combination of methods, which means I study from different sources such as textbooks and movies. In addition, I sometimes visit historical buildings to gain a deeper insight into the events.

建議: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác. Bạn nên chú ý chia động từ cho đúng số ít hoặc số nhiều và dùng từ phù hợp như 'brings' thay vì 'bring', 'helps' thay vì 'help', và 'foster gratitude' thay vì 'foster grateful'.

範例: For me, learning history brings many benefits first and foremost. It helps us avoid making the same mistakes that our ancestors did. In addition, it allows us to understand our origins and fosters gratitude towards the people who contributed to our country.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là chia động từ và sử dụng danh từ số nhiều hoặc số ít đúng cách. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và tránh lặp lại ý. Ví dụ, 'history plays' thay vì 'history play', 'predecessors' thay vì 'predecessor', và 'it allows me' thay vì 'is allow me'.

範例: Definitely yes, history plays a crucial role in many aspects of our society. For instance, thanks to history, scientists learn about revolutions that our predecessors made. In addition, it allows me to understand our origins and fosters gratitude.

× History is a compulsory subject that every student in my country have to learn.

✓ History is a compulsory subject that every student in my country has to learn.

The subject 'every student' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have'. This is a subject-verb agreement rule where singular subjects take singular verbs.

× I usually learned history by using combination method, which means that I will learn history from different sources such as textbook or movie.

✓ I usually learn history by using a combination method, which means that I learn history from different sources such as textbooks or movies.

The adverb 'usually' indicates a habitual action, so the present tense 'learn' is appropriate instead of past tense 'learned'. Also, 'combination method' needs an article 'a'. 'Textbook' and 'movie' should be plural to match 'different sources'.

× In addition, I sometimes go to historical building to get a deeper insight into the event.

✓ In addition, I sometimes go to historical buildings to get a deeper insight into the events.

'Historical building' should be plural 'historical buildings' to match the general meaning. Also, 'insight into the event' should be plural 'events' to refer to multiple historical events.

× For me, learning history bring number of entity first and foremost.

✓ For me, learning history brings a number of benefits first and foremost.

The verb 'bring' should be 'brings' to agree with the singular subject 'learning history'. Also, 'number of entity' is incorrect; it should be 'a number of benefits' to express multiple advantages.

× It help us avoid making the same mistake that our ancestors did.

✓ It helps us avoid making the same mistakes that our ancestors did.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. Also, 'mistake' should be plural 'mistakes' to generalize the idea.

× In addition, it allow us to know about our origins and foster grateful to people who contribute our country.

✓ In addition, it allows us to know about our origins and fosters gratitude to people who contribute to our country.

The verbs 'allow' and 'foster' should be 'allows' and 'fosters' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Grateful' is an adjective; the noun 'gratitude' is correct here. Also, 'contribute our country' needs the preposition 'to'.

× Definitely yes, history play a crucial role in many aspects of our society.

✓ Definitely yes, history plays a crucial role in many aspects of our society.

The verb 'play' should be 'plays' to agree with the singular subject 'history'.

× For instance, thanks to histories, scientists know about revolutions that our predecessor makes.

✓ For instance, thanks to history, scientists know about revolutions that our predecessors made.

'Histories' should be singular 'history' as a general subject. 'Predecessor' should be plural 'predecessors' to match 'revolutions'. The verb 'makes' should be past tense 'made' to match the past event.

× In addition is allow me to know about our origins and foster grateful.

✓ In addition, it allows me to know about our origins and fosters gratitude.

The sentence is missing a subject 'it' and a comma after 'In addition'. 'Allow' and 'foster' should be 'allows' and 'fosters' to agree with 'it'. 'Grateful' should be 'gratitude' as a noun.