礼物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No and why), avoid tense errors and awkward phrasing, and limit to 2–3 concise sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, “because” or “so”).

範例: Yes, I enjoy giving gifts because special occasions like birthdays and anniversaries let me reconnect with people. It also gives me a chance to express my appreciation and feelings for them.

建議: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and specific examples. Correct grammar (e.g., “I know their tastes”) and use linking words (“but”, “however”, “for example”). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and be specific about timing or situations.

範例: I usually give gifts on special occasions, especially to family members because I know their tastes. However, for acquaintances or colleagues, I ask about their preferences or choose a neutral gift, such as a gift card.

建議: Good content and a clear example. Improve grammar and word choice: use correct verb forms and natural phrasing (e.g., “I consider the price and the recipient’s taste”). Add a linking phrase for clarity. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences).

範例: I consider the price and the recipient’s tastes when choosing a gift. For example, I often buy motivational books for my sister because she loves reading.

建議: Clarify and simplify the contrast. Use correct expressions for money (“a lot of money” vs “little money”) and phrasing (“branded gift”). Use linking words (“however”, “on the other hand”) and keep to 2–3 sentences. Be precise about examples of handmade gifts.

範例: It depends. If I can afford it I might buy a branded gift, but if I have less money I prefer to make something handmade, such as a card or a photo frame, because it feels more personal.

建議: Give a direct, concise opinion with reasons and an example. Avoid repetition and fix grammar. Use linking words (“because”, “so”) and limit to 2–3 clear sentences explaining why expensive gifts are not always better.

範例: Not usually. I think thoughtful gifts express feelings better because they show you understand the person’s preferences. For instance, a simple handmade present or a meaningful book can feel more personal than an expensive item.

× Absolutely, when I was giving gifts anyone to own special occasions such as a birthday, anniversary parties and so on, it uh, gives me a new chance to meet with the people and show my expression regarding feelings.

✓ Absolutely. When I give gifts on special occasions such as birthdays and anniversaries, it gives me a chance to meet people and show my feelings.

Original sentence has multiple sentence structure problems: incorrect tense and awkward phrases like 'was giving gifts anyone to own special occasions' and 'show my expression regarding feelings.' Corrected sentence uses simple present 'give' (habitual action), plural nouns 'birthdays and anniversaries', removes unnecessary words, and replaces 'show my expression regarding feelings' with the natural phrase 'show my feelings'. Suggestion: simplify clauses, keep consistent tense for habits, and use common collocations (give gifts on special occasions; show my feelings).

× I usually choose gift according to other choices because if I give to my family members, I knew about their taste and nature.

✓ I usually choose gifts according to their preferences because if I give to my family members, I know their tastes and personalities.

Errors: 'choose gift' needs plural 'gifts' or article; 'according to other choices' is awkward and ungrammatical; 'knew' is past tense but the context requires present 'know'. Also 'nature' is better as 'personality'. Correction uses present simple for habitual actions and correct noun forms. Suggestion: use 'gifts' and 'know' for ongoing knowledge; use 'preferences' and 'tastes' for clarity.

× However, if I choose to give another someone as such as a reality, I give according to their choice.

✓ However, if I choose to give to someone else, I give according to their preferences.

Errors: 'another someone' and 'as such as a reality' are ungrammatical; 'their choice' is acceptable but 'preferences' is more natural. Correction replaces awkward phrases with 'someone else' and uses 'preferences'. Suggestion: use standard pronouns 'someone else' and avoid literal translations like 'as such as a reality'.

× When I choosing a gift, I consider about the price of the gift as well as according the person taste.

✓ When I choose a gift, I consider the price as well as the person's taste.

Errors: 'When I choosing' uses incorrect verb form; should be simple present 'choose'. 'Consider about' is incorrect — 'consider' does not take 'about'. 'According the person taste' is wrong: should be 'the person's taste'. Correction fixes verb form, removes 'about', and uses possessive. Suggestion: use 'When I choose' and 'consider the price' and 'the person's taste'.

× If I give a gift to my sister, I often choose a book because she loves to read some motivational books.

✓ If I give a gift to my sister, I often choose a book because she loves reading motivational books.

Minor issues: 'loves to read some motivational books' is wordy; 'loves reading motivational books' is more natural. Singular/plural is acceptable but streamlining improves fluency. Suggestion: prefer 'loves reading motivational books' or 'loves to read motivational books'.

× Well it depends on the situation.

✓ Well, it depends on the situation.

Missing comma after introductory 'Well' for natural speech punctuation; no major grammar error. Suggestion: include comma to reflect natural pause.

× If I have a lot of money then I choose a high brand gift to my family members.

✓ If I have a lot of money, then I choose a high-end brand gift for my family members.

Errors: 'high brand' is incorrect collocation; use 'high-end brand' or 'expensive brand'. Also 'to my family members' should be 'for my family members'. Correction fixes collocation and preposition. Suggestion: use 'high-end' or 'expensive' and 'for' when indicating recipients.

× On the other hand, if I have a few some money then I choose a handmade gift because it shows my feelings regarding to others.

✓ On the other hand, if I have only a small amount of money, I choose a handmade gift because it shows my feelings for others.

Errors: 'a few some money' is ungrammatical; use 'a small amount of money' or 'little money'. 'Regarding to others' is incorrect preposition; use 'for others'. Correction clarifies quantity and corrects preposition. Suggestion: use 'only a small amount of money' and 'shows my feelings for others'.

× Well not usually when I give a gift to someone and show my expression and feel more personal as well as shows how much I care and also I I feel comfortable after giving some gift to someone.

✓ Not usually. When I give a gift to someone, it feels more personal and shows how much I care, and I feel comfortable afterward.

Original is run-on and ungrammatical with repetitions ('I I'), incorrect verb forms ('show my expression'), and awkward phrasing. Correction breaks into clearer sentences, uses 'it feels more personal' and 'shows how much I care', and removes redundancy. Suggestion: avoid run-on sentences, keep one main idea per clause, and use consistent verbs.