故事— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“I very likes love story”应为“I really liked love stories”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意时态一致。

範例: Yes, I really liked love stories when I was a child. Every night before bed, I would read one story from a book, which I always enjoyed.

建議: 回答中有语法错误，如“prefer to reading”应为“prefer reading”。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时避免重复表达“enjoy the reading”和“like the feeling of read”。

範例: I prefer reading stories because I enjoy the experience. Reading before bed helps me relax and fall asleep.

建議: 回答中时态使用不当，应使用过去时态描述过去的行为。句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并说明原因。

範例: No, I did not write stories when I was a child because I didn't think I was good at it.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，如“I like fairy tales very much”和“I enjoy the story”。建议使用更具体的描述，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: I like fairy tales because when I was a child, their interesting plots helped me relax and enjoy reading.

× Yes, I very likes love story in my childhood and before I go to the bed I will read one story every day and I enjoy it and I like the story in the book and I enjoy reading.

✓ Yes, I very like love stories in my childhood and before I go to bed I read one story every day and I enjoy it and I like the stories in the book and I enjoy reading.

动词likes错误地用于第一人称单数，应改为like。并且love story应为复数形式love stories，因为这里指的是一般的故事。去掉了多余的冠词the和will，保持时态一致。

× Yes, I very likes love story in my childhood and before I go to the bed I will read one story every day and I enjoy it and I like the story in the book and I enjoy reading.

✓ Yes, I very like love stories in my childhood and before I go to bed I read one story every day and I enjoy it and I like the stories in the book and I enjoy reading.

love story应使用复数形式love stories，因为这里指的是一般的故事。

× Yes, I very likes love story in my childhood and before I go to the bed I will read one story every day and I enjoy it and I like the story in the book and I enjoy reading.

✓ Yes, I very like love stories in my childhood and before I go to bed I read one story every day and I enjoy it and I like the stories in the book and I enjoy reading.

短语go to the bed中的冠词the不需要，正确表达是go to bed。

× Yes, I very likes love story in my childhood and before I go to the bed I will read one story every day and I enjoy it and I like the story in the book and I enjoy reading.

✓ Yes, I very like love stories in my childhood and before I go to bed I read one story every day and I enjoy it and I like the stories in the book and I enjoy reading.

这里使用will不合适，描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时。

× For me I prefer to reading them because I enjoy the reading and I like the feeling of read and it makes me happy and before I go to bed I read the story.

✓ For me, I prefer reading them because I enjoy reading and I like the feeling of reading and it makes me happy and before I go to bed I read the story.

动词prefer后应直接跟动名词reading，而不是to reading。短语the feeling of read应改为the feeling of reading。

× For me I prefer to reading them because I enjoy the reading and I like the feeling of read and it makes me happy and before I go to bed I read the story.

✓ For me, I prefer reading them because I enjoy reading and I like the feeling of reading and it makes me happy and before I go to bed I read stories.

the story应改为复数形式stories，因为这里指的是一般的故事。

× No, I don't write a story when I was a child because I think when you can write a story you will have a good maybe achievement and some memorize.

✓ No, I didn't write a story when I was a child because I think when you can write a story you will have a good achievement and some memories.

描述过去的动作应使用过去时态didn't write。memorize是动词，应改为名词memories。

× No, I don't write a story when I was a child because I think when you can write a story you will have a good maybe achievement and some memorize.

✓ No, I didn't write a story when I was a child because I think when you can write a story you will have a good achievement and some memories.

some memorize应改为some memories，memorize是动词，memories是名词，表示记忆。

× But I don't think I can write a.

✓ But I don't think I can write one.

句子不完整，缺少宾语，a后面应接名词或用one代替。

× Maybe fairy tales, because I think when I was a child, I like fairy tales very much and I enjoy the story in the book and the plot with the story and it makes me relax.

✓ Maybe fairy tales, because I think when I was a child, I liked fairy tales very much and I enjoyed the stories in the book and the plot of the story and it made me relax.

描述过去的动作应使用过去时liked和enjoyed。短语the plot with the story应改为the plot of the story。